weekend is over :-(

[panties9]

so it's sunday......i'm going home thursday for the wedding weekend (Katie's brother David is getting married)......and i'm soooooo excited to see Darren Will on thursday night playing in Detroit!! how super cool is that

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[angell_wings]

i ilke this one a lot more than the others i've written...it seems more natural. the only suggestion i have is to eliminate "why can't i make something up?" it just doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem. and at the end...day-dreaming would be more productive. maybe that would flow a little better? all in all, sounds good :)

[panties9]

thanks dude :-)

[angell_wings]

i meant the others you've posted...lol i'm braindead today