You Can Wear Anything (As Long As It's Not Black)

Jun 08, 2009 19:50

Title: You Can Wear Anything (As Long As It's Not Black)
Fandom: Twilight.
Characters: Edward/Bella, Jacob/Bella.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 2180.
Spoilers: None, really. It's pretty AU.
Summary: “I missed you, too,” she replies and she wonders if he can hear the lie in her words, if he can feel her wishing that Jacob was here instead.
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rating: pg-13, character: twilight: bella swan, (fanfic) length: oneshot, pairing: twilight: jacob/bella, book: twilight, pairing: twilight: edward/bella, (fanfic)

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havens June 9 2009, 02:19:19 UTC
How dare you break my heart a little bit. And how dare I enjoy it.

I love j/b and I hate j/b because they're always tragic. Stupid doomed ships, why do I fall for them every damn time?

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backtograce June 9 2009, 02:21:02 UTC
I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to, I swear. ;]

Because they're not all sunshine and puppies? The tragedy is what entices us, me thinks.

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havens June 9 2009, 02:27:53 UTC
Oh, I enjoy it a lot. It's the little masochist in me coming out and loving every second of it.

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fiddlings June 9 2009, 15:31:09 UTC
I think I would like these a lot more if I were a Jacob/Bella girl. LOL. But still, the writing is fantastic, and I loved the Jasper/Bella one (even though there wasn't really shippiness, per se).

I also really love this meme. I might do it, once the play is over.

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backtograce June 9 2009, 15:34:15 UTC
The pieces are actually supposed to go together. I was wanting to turn it into Jasper/Bella, hence him randomly showing up, but it didn't work out that way.

I want to do it again; it totally helped my muse. :]

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fiddlings June 9 2009, 15:40:06 UTC
Yeah, I got that. It just felt like some of them were more together than others. If that makes any sense whatsoever.

That's all right. You can't force those muses. :) I'm just glad you got to write again!

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backtograce June 9 2009, 15:41:17 UTC
Yeah. Some of them did skip time/didn't fit it quite as well, but that's okay. If I want to, I can go back and fill in the empty spaces.

Me too! It's nice to write something that's more than a few hundred words.

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corleones August 17 2009, 14:01:43 UTC
Just read this. I did not know you were a Jacob/Bella girl but I love love love this.

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backtograce August 17 2009, 14:03:38 UTC
I'm a Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella, Jasper/Bella and Rosalie/Bella girl. :D Me and my multi-shipper ways: no fandom stands a chance!

Thanks! :D

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corleones August 17 2009, 14:17:58 UTC
Haha. I multi-ship in every fandom but this one. :)

psst. i don't like edward. :P

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backtograce August 17 2009, 14:19:45 UTC
I'm a terrible multi-shipper. I really don't think there's one fandom I don't multi-ship in. Maybe Hey Arnold!, but that's only because there aren't many pairings available? idk.

I don't like book or movie Edward, but I like him in fanfics depending on how he's written.

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star55 September 25 2009, 02:42:52 UTC
Ooh, this was lovely!
I love the way you've written it - it's not a style I'm completely used to but I utterly loved every moment of it.
Dare I might say I enjoyed this more than the books? I don't want it to sound offensive to you, of course, I think this is rather lovely.
I enjoyed the way Bella became utterly feral unlike her canon self. I think it was sort of a cop out in the books but I love the way you've explored the other side, the what ifs and everything that played through my head throughout reading them.
Jacob has always been a favourite character of mine (Alice is the other lol) and I think you've perceived him really well. I can see exactly how his jaw would clench and just about feel the ache he would be feeling after seeing her for the first time after so long.
Summing it up, I think I really loved this piece.
(And yay for it being my first ever Twilight fanfic too!)
♥♥♥

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backtograce September 25 2009, 03:20:34 UTC
No! Saying you enjoyed it more than the books is a compliment, even if they aren't very well written.

I love the idea of them all being feral, especially Bella. I think that would've been a really interesting way to take her character but yes, her being all ~fine~ in the books was totally a cop out.

I actually didn't like Jake when I first read the books. But then I read Eclipse (I didn't like New Moon at first, but when I reread that one I adored him there too) I really started appreciating him more.

I'm so glad you're pleased with it, especially since it's your first Twilight fanfic. :]

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star55 September 25 2009, 03:46:45 UTC
Oh good! I'm glad ( ... )

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