Title: You Can Wear Anything (As Long As It's Not Black)
Fandom: Twilight.
Characters: Edward/Bella, Jacob/Bella.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 2180.
Spoilers: None, really. It's pretty AU.
Summary: “I missed you, too,” she replies and she wonders if he can hear the lie in her words, if he can feel her wishing that Jacob was here instead.
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I love j/b and I hate j/b because they're always tragic. Stupid doomed ships, why do I fall for them every damn time?
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Because they're not all sunshine and puppies? The tragedy is what entices us, me thinks.
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I also really love this meme. I might do it, once the play is over.
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I want to do it again; it totally helped my muse. :]
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That's all right. You can't force those muses. :) I'm just glad you got to write again!
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Me too! It's nice to write something that's more than a few hundred words.
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Thanks! :D
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psst. i don't like edward. :P
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I don't like book or movie Edward, but I like him in fanfics depending on how he's written.
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I love the way you've written it - it's not a style I'm completely used to but I utterly loved every moment of it.
Dare I might say I enjoyed this more than the books? I don't want it to sound offensive to you, of course, I think this is rather lovely.
I enjoyed the way Bella became utterly feral unlike her canon self. I think it was sort of a cop out in the books but I love the way you've explored the other side, the what ifs and everything that played through my head throughout reading them.
Jacob has always been a favourite character of mine (Alice is the other lol) and I think you've perceived him really well. I can see exactly how his jaw would clench and just about feel the ache he would be feeling after seeing her for the first time after so long.
Summing it up, I think I really loved this piece.
(And yay for it being my first ever Twilight fanfic too!)
♥♥♥
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I love the idea of them all being feral, especially Bella. I think that would've been a really interesting way to take her character but yes, her being all ~fine~ in the books was totally a cop out.
I actually didn't like Jake when I first read the books. But then I read Eclipse (I didn't like New Moon at first, but when I reread that one I adored him there too) I really started appreciating him more.
I'm so glad you're pleased with it, especially since it's your first Twilight fanfic. :]
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