Comments | pantsless_jess: Preoccupied

pantsless_jess

Preoccupied

Nov 16, 2005 23:20

Preoccupied
Words: 1018
Pairing: Remus/Sirius, Marauders' Era
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None to speak of... A bit of fluff.
A/N: Thanks to raven_feathers for beating me unmercifully... And betaing me unmercifully as well. And, of course, thatannegirl, because without my Keeper where would I be ( Read more... )

r/s, pg-13

Comments 15

weppers November 17 2005, 08:15:40 UTC

Ok, so I warned you am bad at feedback, but....GAH!!

First: I had a smile on my face the WHOLE time I was reading it!
2nd: Remus??? Oh my god teh hotness of that action...*is speechless*
3rd: Ok, the chess pieces had me giggling
4th: I loved James and Peter's reaction
5th: And Lily's was gold :D

Ok, so you can tell I liked it?

weppers November 17 2005, 08:18:24 UTC

ok, and um, I can't Im you, the damn thing says you are offline (when you are online :S)

pantsless_jess November 17 2005, 08:50:13 UTC

In fact I can!

Thank you so much... I really appreciate it. Seriously... I'm blushing. *blush* And I don't blush.

jo_slightlymad November 18 2005, 04:21:57 UTC

Read it, I will post better comments tomorrow, but I really liked it.

jo_slightlymad November 19 2005, 03:48:05 UTC

As you know...

*is not good with words*

This really does capture the true perfection that is the perfect kiss. How one loses themselves in it, that the world ceases to exist at that point.

pantsless_jess November 19 2005, 03:50:17 UTC

Wow Jo... Thank you. Just... Thank you.

jo_slightlymad November 19 2005, 03:54:50 UTC

No prob, your icon makes me snicker.

*goes back to drinking*

_suicideking_ November 19 2005, 07:07:56 UTC

Awww.. so fluffy. :)

And an enjoyable R/S read! I mean, there is nothing cuter than puppy!love, especially when Remus is the agressor. There aren't too many fics like that. :)

pantsless_jess November 19 2005, 13:14:32 UTC

Thanks, love... Much at that.

Who'd have thunk that what I would write would be fluffy?

And Agressor!Remus says... RAWR!

the_mareesa November 19 2005, 15:45:50 UTC

I liked the details: the chess pieces, the others coming and going. AND WTF!!!? They turned down an empty dormitory for that kiss! Priceless.

I could tell Peter wished he could have some. ;-)

pantsless_jess November 22 2005, 11:25:42 UTC

Grazie!

As you well know... I am a big fan of detail! And, hey... Sometimes you just get wrapped up in a kiss!

I think Peter is in a constant state of wishing he could have some!

ana_magus November 22 2005, 06:05:45 UTC

OMG - I'm so stupid for not reading this sooner! This is awesome! I got pulled right into the moment. You captured the emotions perfectly.

wow...:D

pantsless_jess November 22 2005, 11:24:32 UTC

Wow? Really? Good times and a half! Thanks!