But somehow the story seemed a bit ... forced. Like she had to write something. Anything. Too many loose ends. Too little really said.
Hmm, I find the same way...but I think that's the result of being given half a chapter. It does feel like a trailer, doesn't it? Like giving you some nice parts, but you haven't got to the real point, which is, of course, in the second part, I hope.
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Hmm, I find the same way...but I think that's the result of being given half a chapter. It does feel like a trailer, doesn't it? Like giving you some nice parts, but you haven't got to the real point, which is, of course, in the second part, I hope.
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