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paper_jam11

The Office fic

Nov 12, 2008 08:22

Title: This is how it works

Characters: Michael/Holly, Dwight

Rating: PG

Word Count: 1017

Summary: Michael misses Holly and Dwight comes by to offer a little (tech) support.

Disclaimer: These characters belong to someone else. Obviously. Title from Regina Spektor

AN: This was maybe going to be a series, but I’m lucky I managed to write anything at all ( Read more... )

fanfic, the office

Comments 18

dollsome November 13 2008, 03:11:07 UTC

Oh, this! Oh, my heart! Poor Michael! And Dwight! Calling monkeys! Kicking holes in the walls!

It will be a tribute to Holly and how she was worth having Dwight in his condo and how he would rather have white dust on his carpet than forget her.

Sweetest, saddest, yet Michaeliest thing ever.

OH, HOLLY, COME BACK AND MAKE ME BELIEVE IN LOVE AGAIN.

paper_jam11 November 13 2008, 04:56:23 UTC

I cannot stand the thought that she and Michael won't be together. Please prove me wrong, show. Thanks for reading!

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paper_jam11 November 13 2008, 04:57:39 UTC

Thanks so much, doll! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though I am supposed to be catching up on your fic instead of writing.

greenfish November 13 2008, 04:47:22 UTC

Oh. No.

There were so many things in here that were so great. First of all, I totally miss Michael/Holly, so you just hit me in the soft spot right there. Second of all, the Michael/Dwight interaction. Wow.

“But I haven’t found the problem. Also, I don’t eat food from countries that support terrorism.” HAHAHAHAHAHA.

And: More than when his mom moved away and told him it would be better if their relationship was long distance.

This is just sad! But I could totally see that being true.

Can I tell you how much I love you? Yea for quality fanfic!!!

paper_jam11 November 13 2008, 04:59:55 UTC

I am totally flattered by your "quality fanfic" comment. Thank you for such generous words.

I miss Holly/Michael so much. I think I was more upset than he was that she was transferred.

ILU, 2.

annakovsky November 13 2008, 19:23:02 UTC

HEE. Wow, your Michael voice is fantastic, and this is so sad and perfect.

paper_jam11 November 19 2008, 04:29:14 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

crackers4jenn November 13 2008, 23:06:31 UTC

Ah! My heart! Michael/Holly is just... effortlessly perfect, and so is this. Who knows, maybe you're really Michael Scott blogging from home right now? Maybe! But then again, your Dwight was dead-on, so it's likely you're not both Michael AND Dwight at the same time. Also, they're fictional, so...

WHAT I'M SAYING IS!

This was my favorite part:

“Please, this condo is practically a deck of cards. Even Pam could punch through this drywall with her tiny hands and she’s a helpless female. Physically. Mentally she could probably rule the world if she applied herself.” Dwight pauses, as if imagining the possible outcome of that situation. “I can’t worry about that now. Have you heard any strange clicks on the line?” Dwight yanks a few yards of cable out of the hole. “Do you suspect that strangers on the street are watching you?”Partially because in some small, sick way the idea of Dwight/Pam is appealing to me, but also because it made me laugh. No time for pondering Pam's ability to rule the world! Strangers watching Michael on the ( ... )

paper_jam11 November 19 2008, 07:35:09 UTC

Thank you so much for such a detailed read and feedback. I'm really glad I could entertain you!