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Fic: Fools Who Believe (SGA/SPN)

Jun 08, 2007 00:32

Okay, so like I said, I was writing porn. I think this is actually the longest porn I've ever written, so you should all read it and give me pointers for future porn writing. It's a semi-sequel to We're Fools In Need.

I would like to say THANK YOU to Becky / quidditchkiss for being my one true love and muse. Without her I would never get anything written, I ( Read more... )

writing, porn, spn: dean winchester, sga: john sheppard

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quidditchkiss June 8 2007, 04:49:14 UTC

It takes a bit of prodding, but the engine holds until his tires hit curb. When he shuts her down she sinks; letting out an audible groan. His t-shirt is stuck to his back, sweat collecting round his temples, and when he wipes a hand across his brow it comes back wet.

I pictured that so well in my head. Like, I even heard scratchy country music coming from somewhere, so scratchy that you're too lazy to switch the station over to something that ISN'T scratchy. lol

And for some reason, John is wearing a black t-shirt. I don't know why.

John nods, as ready as he cares to be and mouths wordlessly as Dean replaces his fingers with his cock. It’s tight, and John has to remind himself to breathe.

BEAUTIFUL IMAGE IN MY HEAD HERE. I saw John nodding in my head and the look of unadulterated pleasure on his face was so incredible.

His strut is bow-legged and John takes in the curves of his calves; something he knows only by touch. He studies the line of Dean’s shoulders, watches how they feed into his neck, tan skin pinched beneath ( ... )

paperbinned June 8 2007, 04:53:53 UTC

*runs about flailing* You have no idea how incredibly happy this comment makes me. I owe you so much for being around to bother with snippets and phrases, to ask questions to, to have you call your dad to give me car advice!

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I just, thank you. Thank you so much.

kimberlite June 8 2007, 07:26:15 UTC

Mmm...sultry like the summer. These two are smoking hot together. :)

paperbinned June 8 2007, 17:08:17 UTC

Hahaha, I completely agree.

torakowalski June 8 2007, 15:30:18 UTC

Guh, gorgeous and hot. *fans self*

paperbinned June 8 2007, 17:08:43 UTC

Thank you so much! :">

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paperbinned June 8 2007, 18:41:36 UTC

Heee! I'm glad you like it! :D

javajunkie13 June 8 2007, 17:32:07 UTC

Mmmm, hot like burning and the perfect thing to start the summer off with. :D

paperbinned June 8 2007, 18:42:16 UTC

Haha, thank you so much! :"D