hey. hey look username twins. at the horror of being entirely unoriginal i'm changing it as soon as you've seen it.
same idea but mine only has one entry and is entirely private. ENOUGH OF ME ACTING LIKE WE'RE THE SAME PERSON AND WHATNOT: i liked the first little vignette.
"spent his cash convincing us that the desert was a starscape took our lives for satellites so we could cry, 'naked, naked, FOUL.'"
oh, and: i like the first vignette, too. the second is a weird coctail of "high school memories" and "intellectual masturbation" that doesn't necessarily work. hmm.
i kind of wondered what you thought of "the salvage." it's further down the page.
you have a knack for writing well-balanced dialogue. i've never written a story/vignette/script, even, without the use of some sort of unquotey device. i think if you keep writing in the vein you are and developing your stuff in that area you could have an enviable talent on your hands.
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hey look username twins.
at the horror of being entirely unoriginal i'm changing it as soon as you've seen it.
same idea but mine only has one entry and is entirely private.
ENOUGH OF ME ACTING LIKE WE'RE THE SAME PERSON AND WHATNOT:
i liked the first little vignette.
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"spent his cash convincing us
that the desert was a starscape
took our lives for satellites
so we could cry, 'naked, naked,
FOUL.'"
oh, and: i like the first vignette, too. the second is a weird coctail of "high school memories" and "intellectual masturbation" that doesn't necessarily work. hmm.
i kind of wondered what you thought of "the salvage." it's further down the page.
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i've never written a story/vignette/script, even, without the use of some sort of unquotey device. i think if you keep writing in the vein you are and developing your stuff in that area you could have an enviable talent on your hands.
i'm off to go mitten shopping.
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