Bwahahah, one of the main elements of writing is the element of surprise, and...er...yes. Surprise. :) Anyways, I'm glad you liked it! Keep checking for an update, I hope to finish it soon.
I LOVE THE ENDING..AHHH...I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY..PLEASE DON'T STOP!!! AHH...I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE.!!!! "They say he’s ours" He Should Be. OOOOOH I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..PLEASE MAKE THIS STORY END WITH JACK REALIZING THAT ELIZABETH "DID" OR "STILL" LOVES HIM...KEEP UP THE AMAZING J/E WORK!!
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Your description of their arrival was perfect. :)
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“They say he’s ours.”
Ooooooh...love it!!!!! :)
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:] sorry I'm a bit too excited!
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