elsewhere

Sep 05, 2005 08:36


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else, even
if noise, was
worth the
hurt
even if
flesh had nothing
to keep or
words could not
call out this
life that i
could not live
all this time
without
not living
sometimes.

outside i
found birds
frozen
in mid-flight
outside
where
everybody
needs to sleep
sometimes.

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deusexbeginning September 5 2005, 21:47:53 UTC
I dunno...

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paperhouse September 6 2005, 05:06:25 UTC
yeah..

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spicktastic September 6 2005, 03:35:59 UTC
I like it, the two twisting sentences. I think I'm going to copy you...

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paperhouse September 6 2005, 05:09:18 UTC
sure, i'd like to see what you do

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