Comments | paperhouse: our kindness

paperhouse

our kindness

Sep 09, 2005 17:14

there she was in her ( Read more... )

Comments 11

aelene September 10 2005, 00:52:53 UTC

x for;

those
horrible insects, I thought.
I walked over to the saucer and
got on my knees. I touched my
tongue to it. then touched my lips.

that crack in the rhythm.

paperhouse September 10 2005, 08:36:28 UTC

mhm. had to slow it down there.

spicktastic September 10 2005, 04:10:06 UTC

dream-like. good. goood.

deusexbeginning September 10 2005, 14:55:18 UTC

very nice, this one struck a chord with me.

...maybe...one day...I can stuff one or two of my things down your throat?...maybe?

This reminds me of Hafiz (a persian poet) for some reason.

paperhouse September 10 2005, 18:47:15 UTC

sure i'll look at things if you want.
i haven't heard of hafiz so if you wanna type up some of that it would be appreciated as well.

vaeda September 10 2005, 17:07:13 UTC

mm.

harbours September 14 2005, 19:28:55 UTC

possibly my favourite thing you have ever written.

paperhouse September 15 2005, 01:51:56 UTC

its very simple, yes?

maybe it makes you want to start writing again? mm?

harbours September 15 2005, 02:59:04 UTC

it's all true!

this made me laugh out loud. the comment, I mean. not the poem. hee.

p.s. my laptop is befuddled and thus I no longer have access to AIM for awhile. grrf. apparently I need to learn how to write e-mails again on top of everything else.

paperhouse September 15 2005, 06:51:43 UTC

do you use msn?