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In the Wrong Pt 8

May 28, 2010 22:06

Title: "In the Wrong" 8/10
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Warning: Mild swearing, some language not suitable for children. Hell this whole fic isn't suitable for children.
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong ( Read more... )

seungri, tabiri, fanfiction, gri, angst, g-dragon

Comments 37

griluvisvip May 29 2010, 03:15:26 UTC

SPOT!!!!!!! Ninja skillz baby :D

papersanguine May 29 2010, 03:18:22 UTC

Holy frick! You are soo good!

griluvisvip May 29 2010, 03:34:52 UTC

*facepalm* DAMNIT JIYONG!! WHY!? ARGH THEY WERE SO CLOSE!! SO GOD-DAMN CLOSE!! STUPID STUPID JIYONG!! WHY CAN'T YOU JUST LET HIM IN!? FOR THE SAKE OF BIG BANG!? THAT'S A LOAD OF CRAP AND YOU KNOW IT JIYONG!! If it was really about Big Bang Jiyong wouldn't be running around like a self-pitying misunderstood teenager and making everyone else MISERABLE!! The very fact that he's pushing Seungri away and treating him like DIRT is the very reason everyone else is MISERABLE. IF he's BROKEN AND MESSED UP then the only medicine for that is SEUNGRI LOVE!! WHY CAN'T HE SEE THAT!? I swear to Buddha and on my dog's grave that if Jiyong doesn't stop Seungri from leaving, and Big Bang breaks up because of this, I will reach through my computer and strangle him myself. *sniffle* My poor Riri. He doesn't deserve this Jiyong! HE DOESN'T DESERVE THIS!! YOU'RE BEING UNFAIR!! Oops there goes my Seungri bias again ( ... )

papersanguine May 29 2010, 03:53:28 UTC

Dude, i so love your replies! They help me decided how much of a bastard i want ji to be in the next chapter. I actually scaled him back a little because i didn't want to you commit murder for Riri. :) Thanks so much for sticking with this fic! I promise(hope) it'll be worth it!

Thread 11

g_odalisque13 May 29 2010, 04:44:37 UTC

argh! so damn close!
but i was a happy fangirl that Jiyong wasn't being as much of a jerk. but him being all vulnerable and unsure made me want to hug him. even though this is a fictitious situation.
and poor Ri!
and poor Seunghyun!
i will give them mental hugs as well.
i really hope things get better for all of them.

papersanguine May 29 2010, 05:55:32 UTC

Hahah, i don't know why but i pictured Ji sitting at his computer reading this fic and clenching his fist and saying "argh! So damn close!" because of you! Not that Jiyong would frequent an english livejournal community dedicated to his angsty love of the maknae, but hey, i can dream, huh?

Thanks for hanging in there! I know this fic is long, but it's almost done!!

g_odalisque13 May 29 2010, 05:59:32 UTC

no need to apologize for long fics! i definitely do not mind the length since i'm enjoying it so much!

and i'm glad that i gave you a mental image of Jiyong reading this :) haha. maybe someday he'll be bored and working on his english or something. haha.
if i was famous, i'd totally read fanfiction about myself lol *hides*

papersanguine May 29 2010, 06:02:02 UTC

Oh my gosh, I think gri fanfiction is the PERFECT way for him to learn english better! What a perfect idea! I think we should find someone who knows Korean to write him a letter and tell him!

And i actually think about that sometimes! I wonder what people would write about me and would i think it was totally sick or something?! Haha

Thread 6

peligr0 May 29 2010, 05:32:58 UTC

wow your jiyong in this chapter is... idek, i want to hug him. actually all of them, they are all so broken here i want to hug them all to make them better :(. i want to trust jiyong that what he's doing will be the best for the group... but i hope he'll come to find that pushing seungri away isn't really the answer. awwww these boys...

and i love the reference to Tell Me GoodBye :).

papersanguine May 29 2010, 05:56:52 UTC

I think they all deserve a hug! Don't worry, though, I've got the next chapter all done and Jiyong isn't so much of a bastard. In fact, you may actually start to like him again! Thanks for reading!!

vaneszikkipower May 29 2010, 16:16:02 UTC

no no nooooooooooo
Ri you can't do this!!!
Just stop, breathe and think a moment!!!

papersanguine May 29 2010, 23:34:53 UTC

Haha, i love the advice for him! Mind if i snag it for a line in the last chapter?

vaneszikkipower May 31 2010, 06:07:48 UTC

Ha ;)
Just can't help it sometimes...
Of course you can use it :)

papersanguine June 2 2010, 06:15:48 UTC

I totally stole it. I added it to Jiyong instead, cause frankly he needed a moment to just stop and think about the asshat he'd been. :0

ssunsetgloww May 29 2010, 17:35:47 UTC

wow. beautiful

papersanguine May 29 2010, 23:34:19 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for reading!