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In the Wrong Pt 9

May 29, 2010 00:45

Title: "In the Wrong" 9/10
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Warning: Mild swearing, some language not suitable for children. Hell this whole fic isn't suitable for children.
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong ( Read more... )

seungri, tabiri, fanfiction, gri, angst, g-dragon

Comments 25

griluvisvip May 30 2010, 05:43:55 UTC

SPOT!!!!!!! NINJA SKILLZ BABY :D

papersanguine May 30 2010, 06:03:14 UTC

Hahah you are always so good!

griluvisvip May 30 2010, 06:07:31 UTC

DAMNIT JIYONG!! I SAID FIX SEUNGRI NOT EVERYONE ELSE BUT SEUNGRI!! ARGH!! I mean it's great that he's finally moving on, that's wonderful. But Seungri is still hurting and that's NOT wonderful. I am so proud of Jiyong for finally moving on and getting over everything, believe me, I know how hard it is to do get over something like that and I just want to hug him and protect him from the evil world. But he can't just keep neglecting Seungri like this. Because sooner or later, Seungri's just going to turn into another Jiyong, and we do not need two broken, angry, self-pitying souls under the same roof. That's a catastrophe waiting to happen. I am actually amazed and happy that Jiyong even showed a modicum of concern for Seungri, IN FRONT OF SEUNGRI. That's a huge milestone. But then he goes right back to ignoring poor Riri. Talk about one step forward, two steps back. I'm glad Daesung finally had a talking to with Jiyongie though. And Daedae's right. Seungri knows exactly what he's getting into, and I know he can handle Jiyongie, broken ( ... )

griluvisvip May 30 2010, 06:08:17 UTC

AGHH!! I just saw you're avatar/icon thingy and it's so adorable :D I love it!!

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g_odalisque13 May 30 2010, 06:29:18 UTC

i do not hate Jiyong. no matter how much pain you had him put Seungri through. to say that is like blasphemy! lol. i am such a whipped fan *facepalms*
anyway i really liked this chapter. i feel like it helped explain a lot about the rest of the group, not even just Jiyong.
it's good that he's making amends and trying his best to help the other members.
i just hope that things will work out for him and Seungri.
so i hope you write the next chapter soon!!

papersanguine May 30 2010, 06:51:47 UTC

haha, i know i love Jiyong as a bitchy selfinvolved bastard! But, Seungri needs a snuggle soon or the fic will never end, i'll have to quit my job to keep up with the writing and I'll be poverty sticken and eating out of dumpsters! Hhaha thanks for your loyalty to Jiyong though! He needs it!

stupidefleurk May 30 2010, 10:48:00 UTC

“I feel so sick. It’s like when he cries, I feel…hot. Like I need to take him any way I can and make him mine.”
THAT.WAS.HOT LOL I'm sick 8)

Bae is the friend of my dreams ,I wonder if he's even real sometimes XD
I never hated Jiyong,I just feel pity for him ;_; Seungri should show him that he's not going to be a shitty relationship like jiyong think.

It's almost the end already D: I'm sad but I'm excited to see what's going to happen.I hope it will be a long chapter ;p

papersanguine May 30 2010, 16:19:58 UTC

Oh bb me too! I totally understand. I don't think normal people spend this much time thinking up ways to hurt the maknae. ;D

But, I'm ok with that!

peligr0 May 30 2010, 12:22:14 UTC

Seungri’s hand swept his as he walked past and Jiyong had the inexplicable urge to grasp on as tightly as he could and never let go. But as he pictured their inevitable failure as a couple he let him pass by untouched. Still, the beginning of his dream had been nice.
*sigh* the image of them like this....

“You’re lucky. You have someone who has seen your darkness and still wants you. Broken pieces and all.”
^spot on dae. i really see that they(gri) are lucky to have each other omg gri <333.

and i really love your jiyong. he is trying to fix all of these. i love him. and bae, the last part feels so real, especially since i read his latest star diaries and i really want to see him "shine" again.

i feel sad, really, that this is the last chapter and then this will end :((. i'll miss this.

papersanguine June 2 2010, 06:12:46 UTC

I should go read the star diaries. I'm so behind it's redonkulous! And don't worry, i have the last chapter and then the epilogue to do still. I love epilogues. It's like a bonus chapter that i can do ANYTHIGN i want with. I can even make it complete fluff or crack if i want. :D

readyhearts May 30 2010, 15:29:39 UTC

OMG. IM GOING TO DIE AGAIN. I adore you. I really do.

papersanguine June 2 2010, 06:09:00 UTC

Wow, you are too sweet!