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papersanguine

A Manic Madness Part 1/2

Aug 04, 2010 00:04

Title: A Manic Madness Part 1/2
Rating: Better just go NC-17 to be safe.
Genre: Dramatic angst/Slight horror?
Paring: GRI(Jiyong/Seungri)
Summary: How can you tell when your mind leaves you if every insane thought seems so right? Poor Seungri, he never really saw it coming...

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seungri, fanfiction, jiyong, nc-17, gri, angst, horror

Comments 28

griluvisvip August 4 2010, 05:55:37 UTC

SPOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

griluvisvip August 4 2010, 05:56:10 UTC

HA! I AM NINJA BABY! I'll BRB to comment in a little bit. ;)

griluvisvip August 4 2010, 06:05:30 UTC

I'm...speechless. I'm completely, utterly, speechless. I can't even begin to formulate any coherent thoughts about this fic. It's just so...WOW. Angsty, twisted, and BEAUTIFUL!! lol I must sound like a nut job right now, enjoying such a sadistic, twisted, angsty fic but the heart wants what the heart wants, and babe, my heart wants THIS. It's beautiful, I love it, I love YOU. Good job ;) Can't wait for part 2.

papersanguine August 5 2010, 22:58:52 UTC

Yay! I glad you're so incoherent! I hope it was twisted enough. I was gonna have some kind of a resolution in the second part but now i really wanna throw some more twisted bits in!

loserforya August 4 2010, 06:29:37 UTC

Hehe i had to read the last part 3 times because even though you said it wasnt rape it looked like it xD But cant wait to read the second part :D

papersanguine August 5 2010, 22:59:18 UTC

It will be up soon to warp your mind a little more. :)Thanks for reading!

stupidefleurk August 4 2010, 09:42:31 UTC

SPOT !I'm going to put this chapter in my mp4 and read it peacefully in my couch lol
YOU'RE THE BEST !!!!*cheerleader*

stupidefleurk August 4 2010, 12:51:20 UTC

I didn't expect this,I thought you would make a mad Jiyong because of the jealousy,not because it's a disease.I like this version,it's very interesting and maybe even more angsty.Well not angsty,rather dark.

So I decided to split it into two parts while i decided on happy or sad ending. :) Let me know what you want!

Personnaly I don't see how the ending could be happy,I think it would come out ridiculous.The subject is serious so it should continue like this (except if you think that locking Jiyong in a psychiatric hospital is a happy end lol).

Anyway ,I can't wait to know the end :D

papersanguine August 5 2010, 23:01:10 UTC

I know, it kind of took on a mind of it's own. I wanted to do a jealousy fic but the more i watched the video i saw such underlying madness that i had to take it here instead. I mean, a normal person doens't just off their girlfriend cause she left/cheated on him. Well...hopefully.

I really appreciate the feedback. I think dark is the way the ending is going to have to go!

papersanguine August 5 2010, 22:59:35 UTC

OH my gosh, you're the best cheerleader ever!!!!!

leeseungri August 4 2010, 11:41:19 UTC

sooooooo darkk and yummyyyyyyyyyyyy~

leeseungri August 5 2010, 08:17:17 UTC

i vote for a darkkkkk and happy ending~ ekekekekkeeke

papersanguine August 5 2010, 23:02:15 UTC

Hhah I'm so glad you like the darkness too! I was worried people would be squicked by it. I didn't know there were so many twisted people in this comm.

I'M SO PROUD!!!! <3333

azenzensation_0 August 4 2010, 15:30:59 UTC

OMGOSH!!! the pic scared the crab out of me!!!! ok imma go read it now lol XD

azenzensation_0 August 4 2010, 15:42:48 UTC

IJDFWEIOFJORGJRIOE GJ EH O.o
i'm scared! but i love it!!! i think if the ending is sad it woudl be better amybe like locking Ji up somewhere or him just disappear and Ri lives his whole life in fear cause he doesn't know where Ji is and is paranoid and Ji is actually watching from afar and is enjoying it...... -_-' i need to stop watchin criminal minds lol

hope you update soon XD

papersanguine August 5 2010, 23:03:19 UTC

OOoO!!! Good idea! I think i'm gonna have to make it a sad/twisted ending. It might just seem fake if i don't. Thanks!!!