Empty Streets of Gold and Pavement

[papersanguine]

Title: Empty Streets of Gold and Pavement
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/Drama
Paring: GRI
Summary: "It took so long to get used to his indifference that when he finally found the ache in his chest had disappeared, he was already a strong baby and Jiyong was staring at him with strange eyes

Comments

[papersanguine]

Spot for griluvisvip

[griluvisvip]

Thank-you unnie~<3 K imma sleep now and read this first thing tomorrow morning. Promise!! I'm in bed using my itouch right now and it's killing my eyesight XD

[griluvisvip]

I lied. I totally just killed my eyesight and almost died of heatstroke for you and your fic unnie~ but it was totally worth it ;D I promise to come back and leave a more coherent and appropriate comment in the morning after I get some sleep and fresh air XD. Gnite unnie~<3

[papersanguine]

I'm sorry that you almost went blind for me! I really appreciate your dedication to being first though! <3!!!

[stupidefleurk]

SPOT !You little genius ;_;

[stupidefleurk]

First:what the fuck where you doing in this empty street ,crazy girl,peddobear's gonna hunt you :O

Uhu D: I think I'm addict to your angst.You have a real talent to write it ,it's always gorgeous and I feel goooood 8D kinda like this man right here:

[stupidefleurk]

And I was listening to this song while reading it so it was even sader :(
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbQt25nOTKo&feature=related
*go listen to fluffy songs*

[papersanguine]

I have actually never heard that song before, but it was so perfect! I love it now!

[azenzensation_0]

T__T this is so sweet!! my heart was breaking when i was reading this!! i was like NOOOOO RI DONT!!!GD!!! NOOOOO! JUST TELL EACHOTHER I LOVE YOU AND HAVE HOT STEAMY LOVVVVE!!!

sowie.... -_-' had a long day and was finally able to check lj :D but i don't know when i'll check it again :(

[papersanguine]

I think this comm is effecting me though cause in the past i wouldn't have thrown in a semi-happy ending. Darn all the fluff (i secretly love it) that is corrupting me. <3 Thank you for reading! I hope your week gets better!

[peligr0]

i read this yesterday but wasn't able to comment. but know that i'm always reading your fics lol.

anyway, your angst is always so lovely. empty streets + epik high = awesome combination for GRi! <3.

the first part was confusing at first, but it's ok, i finally got it XD. i'm just really glad that at the end they finally got back in each other's arms <3. the image of jiyong sleeping at maknae's room while he was away is just agrhyw!%@#&$(*%^Uwgalghas;h <3

i really love that part.

[papersanguine]

Yay! I love that! I totally understand your confusion. I came back on this morning and was so ashamed at all the spelling errors and a couple sentences just ended for no reason. (I gotta stop writing stuff at 1am) I tried to fix some stuff before I posted it in the comm, so hopefully it'll be better. If not, too bad XD haha

Thank you for always reading! You're like a little G-Ri guarding angel. :D

[peligr0]

i read it again, it's all good now \o/. awesome! hehehe. awww but inspiration usually hit at that time. lol well at least for me. i like doing stuffs late at night XD.

[papersanguine]

I know, it's so frustrating! During the evening when I actually have time, i just putt around on youtube or lj trying to waste time. But then when it's 1:20 am and i have to be up for work in 5 hours I can't stop writing. /lame XD

[gemofmusic]

OMG \wipes tears/ my heart broke for Ri when i started reading.
So sweet and beautiful angst!(secretly loves) I love how the story builds up and how the ending turns out. ;D

[papersanguine]

Thank you! I also (not so secretly) love angst. I can never seem to write a fluffy piece with out including at least some angsty moments. :D Thank you for reading!