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Punishment to Fit the Crime

Oct 28, 2010 12:05

Title:Punishment to Fit the Crime
Rating: R cause of swearing and a little violence
Genre: Angst/Smut
Paring: GRI
Summary: I'll let you decide what Ri's crime was...

( Punishment to Fit the Crime )

seungri, fanfiction, jiyong, smut, gri, angst, slash

Comments 12

justcallmepriya October 28 2010, 17:14:57 UTC

I was listening to Eminem Ft. Rihanna - Love The Way You Lie
and for some reason, it really went with this fic so much *blinks*

ANYWAYS, moving on
ANDIE HELLO :))))

SlightlySadistic!Jiyong!!!

“You fucked up.” The low voice growled in his ear and he nodded despite himself.
MADE ME SHIVER! SHIVER!!!! Jiyong + growling = something I need to hear in real life.

BUT PLEASE JIYONG, YOU'VE GOT TO REFRAIN FROM DOING THESE THINGS TO RI :'(

Andie, this was wonderfully written (like all your amazingly brilliant stories), it really really was :)

papersanguine October 28 2010, 17:19:14 UTC

WHOA! You are so fast!!! I seriously JUST posted this like a minute ago! XDDD

Sorry this fic is kinda messed up. Random life stuff makes me write Ri being punished. XD Don't worry, I'll write Ji getting his own back soon~

Thanks for reading this as always <333333

justcallmepriya October 28 2010, 21:44:19 UTC

Really!!? My laptop says you posted this at 12:05pm and that I commented at 5:14pm! o__o''' But okay, I'm just very quick on the updates then. :)

LMAO! Jiyong getting his own back! oh I can't wait...:DDD

Hope the random real life stuff is all okay!

Thank you for writing such beautiful stories :) <333333

papersanguine October 29 2010, 02:04:06 UTC

Weird!! No, it was like three minutes after i posted it or something. XDDD

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griluvisvip October 28 2010, 17:50:23 UTC

DAMNIT! LOL boo my spot~ I was taking an exam so I couldn't spot this...ahhh I'm losing my touch XP OH WELL. Off to read and properly comment ^_^ Love you unnie~<3

peligr0 October 28 2010, 22:48:16 UTC

SPOT. because you and priya spoil my gri heart with fics, i haven't even read some of them that you guys posted earlier DDD;.

jun_1712 October 29 2010, 13:46:11 UTC

AH! Why am I so late?! Why didn't I see your update yesterday already? Sorry for commenting just now >.<

I love this. <3
You know, before starting to read your fics, I wasn't really into...hm, how do I call it? Smutty violence? Whatever. But you really made me fall in love with this :3!!

As much as I liked the image of Jiyong staring at Seungri with angry but hungry eyes, his hand pushing into his windpipe (I don't know why I especially remembered that detail but I loved it) - the ending was the best. When Jiyong told him not to do it again. Perfect.

Thank you. <3

papersanguine October 30 2010, 00:07:09 UTC

\o/ I love that you like fics like this now~ I didn't like them before i went to Gri, but those boys just SCREAM angst and violence to me.

XD Thanks again for always reading!!