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bambayahh January 19 2009, 02:07:25 UTC
so after reading this, i'm officially your fan. LOL.
I love this and everything about it :O

You're an amazing writer, and usually i don't read second person, but the funny thing is, i never even realized it was second person until i re-read it (because it was so good) lol, yea i fail =__=;;

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theia88 January 19 2009, 02:56:53 UTC
Ahaha, after i've read once again.. I've just realized what this fic means...
So the book here means kibum? Omg..how could i didn't know that??

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paperteuk January 19 2009, 03:00:20 UTC
I thought it was pretty obvious. XD;;
... on second thought, maybe I'm just too dirty-minder. D:

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scylladakylla January 19 2009, 06:03:49 UTC
Awwww. ♥

I can totally see little!Onew reading under the covers.

It eventually becomes an evening ritual because Kibum claims your bed is warmer than his is.
I can totally see this, Kibum being all, "Because your bed is WARM", rather than admitting, oh, I don't know, "Because the sex is really really hot". XD

Though I guess the metaphor with Key and books can be taken as either sexual or not. =X Because I'm a pervert, I found it sexual, but maybe I'm wrong!

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paperteuk January 19 2009, 15:03:48 UTC
Honestly, I don't know how to look at it in a non-sexual way. :\

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scylladakylla January 19 2009, 20:18:11 UTC
Maybe just a lot of... non-sexual... touching............ Okay, yeah, that doesn't work. :| But the thought of them having sex while the other three are all sleeping IN THE SAME ROOM is kind of awkward. XD

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paperteuk January 20 2009, 23:58:09 UTC
Yeah, it is awkward and normally I don't write stuff like that but I figured, hey, it's not the most awkward idea ever conceived in the history of SHINee ficcing. I'm pretty sure someone out there has written something worse! XD

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misschatelle January 19 2009, 07:20:19 UTC
Lol! I love innuendos!

I love smut, but sometimes, innuendos are even more fun and.. well, tasty!

I love the analogy Kibum/book, it's something I wouldn't have thought and it gives to the maybesex something very beautiful, which isn't seen very often.

I love this, really! After a supposedly 45 minutes course that actually took me 1 hour and a half on internet, I guess I needed something like that! THANK YOU!! ^^

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paperteuk January 19 2009, 14:55:26 UTC
Kibum is a very educational book. Jinki would agree. XD

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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lovelysonata January 19 2009, 16:08:42 UTC
Whoa. This is really nice~^_^
Chibi Dubu reading books in the night is really cute. Oh and Key not admitting his real motive for sleeping in Dubu's bed~!
You find that there is no need for flashlights as he lets you turn his pages slowly (and quietly, lest you wake up the other boys), bend his spine the way no one can and read him to the end because you can feel him clearly, as if you’re seeing him under the warm morning sunlight.

Beautiful~XD

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paperteuk January 19 2009, 16:13:11 UTC
Key muse is appalled at everybody questioning the reason behind his preference on sleeping places. He says he just likes warm places- no more, no less.

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lovelysonata January 19 2009, 17:08:03 UTC
Hahaha! Okay if he says so!XDD
Who wouldn't want to sleep in Dubu's bed anyway?! I want to sleep in it too!Hurhurhur~XD

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