i think i just wrote a fic.

[papertownz]

[fic] enough to know.
jongkey (mostly implied, but they were my intention).
501 words.

a/n; i have no idea what this is. i was looking through gifs of jongkey staring at each other and i got this urge to write something down.
i've always wanted to give fanfic-writing a try, since i love reading it so much.
this is my first, so i'd love to hear some

Comments

[mei_zi]

Jonghyun is sitting against the wall; his back slouched against the cold practice room walls. He pants heavily and reaches for his water bottle. Sweat drips from his sideburns down to the left side of his neck, trailing his defined collarbone as the drops disappear at the hem of his black wife beater. As he drinks, his pinky finger rises just a little bit, unconsciously, you suppose. His head tilts back and his dark brown hair softly touches the wall; his sharp jaw line freely exposed to your view as he takes one gulp, two, three… and the water bottle is empty. He gives a big sigh and wipes his mouth with the same hand that holds the bottle. As he puts it down, he smiles and looks up in your direction.

SCREAMING AT THIS ENTIRE PARAGRAPH. ♥

I have just melted into a mushy pool of teenage hormones, oh boyyy~

[papertownz]

jonghyun is just that good.
he makes regular crappy writing appear amazing ♥

TY FOR COMMENTING <3

[light_batter]

sdjkhdjskhdfjakhdjahdjasd ! this is so nice, rah I think
it describes them and their 'lovestares' perfectly

The line "You notice how he always touches the back of his head with his right hand whenever he is asked an embarrassing question. You notice how he holds a pencil with three fingers, but a pen with four.
is so beautiful, I keep re-reading it because it just portrays how much
of Jonghyun, Key notices.

Guh comment is filled with incoherency, please forgive me.

[papertownz]

waaaa~ ty ♥♥♥

[bree_nd]

Wow, your first fic? It's really good.

And all the hinted stuff is sexy. :)

You observe a lot for Jonghyun. It's so cute.

[papertownz]

i made up most of jonghyun's habits though :P
but yesss, first fic ever ^^"

ty for commenting ♥

[bree_nd]

You made them up? Omg! The way you described it, I really believed it!

You should write more, bb~ Don't let that talent go to waste! :)

[papertownz]

the only thing i know is 100% true is the tongue/busy hands habit.
the rest i did make up ^^

but omg ty ♥
i guess i'll have to write some more ^^"

[papertownz]

omg TYSM bb ♥♥
i was also smiling as i was writing this ^^"
gosh jongkey is so beautifulllll.

[shan_ah_non]

You don’t know what is it about this boy that makes your heart beat so uncontrollably fast. You don’t know how can anyone be so perfect, yet so real. You just know that he is there, and you are here, and that’s enough to know.

This is i feel when i am crushing.
So well written. ^^

[papertownz]

thank you ♥