What does the ocean look like? - 2min [3/3]

[mariposa02]

What does the ocean look like? | 2min | pg - 13 | 4000+ [14.000+ the whole fic]
au, angst, drama, romance  | beta-ed by forevershining | character death, incest (they are not related by blood)

Comments

[crystalshawol]

Both beautiful and utterly heartbreaking. These types of fic always having me feeling like a piece has been ripped from my heart and I always...Always cry. (and please don't apologize for making me cry because sometimes when it comes to things like this I know I need to cry. I need to release the emotions I have gathered up after reading all these words

[mariposa02]

I'm actually kind of glad you cried (I jope that doesn't sound strange but it was kind of my goal to make the reader cry in the end)

I'm glad you enjyed this fic and thank you for reading and commenting
♥

[haruhanayukiko]

This is so beautiful. I honestly didn't think Taem had an illness. I thought he was having a mental disorder or something haha

You described their emotions so detailed I can sympathies with them

Especially love the ending <3

[mariposa02]

he kind of has a mental disorder because of his illness or smth...dunno
thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[mariposa02]

thank you very much. I'll keep writing ;)

[justangel]

This fic is painfully beautiful. Since the beginning, I've sensed something heavy looming, but I just can't stop reading. In the end, it took me a while after finished reading to control myself before I can comment.

I love how Taemin became the first who stated that they needed to kiss. It was sort of consistent with his character. And I love how Minho succumbed, even at the beginning only, to his passion. And I love how then it led to the series of incident that sent Taemin away. It's like...Minho had to deal with the consequence of tasting the forbidden fruit.

Thank you so much for sharing this. I hope you don't mind me memming the story.

[mariposa02]

I don't mind at all (it makes me happy)

thank you very much I'm glad you liked it ♥

[linji_yjys]

i am not one to cry...but i shed a tear or two for your story...this was utterly breathtaking...the way you made the reader..or just me...connect with poor taeminnie and minho...thats why this story is so intense...you can def feel the love and sorrow in your work...more stories please!!! i will support you from here on out!!!

[mariposa02]

thank you very much I'm glad that the fic touched you ♥
and I'll keep writing ;)