What does the ocean look like? - 2min [3/3]

[mariposa02]

What does the ocean look like? | 2min | pg - 13 | 4000+ [14.000+ the whole fic]
au, angst, drama, romance  | beta-ed by forevershining | character death, incest (they are not related by blood)

Comments

[notneedwords]

I almost cry when I read this. well, I should have cry but I couldn't, coz it's 4 AM in here and my mom will freak out if she caught me cry alone in front of computer. lol ignore me

this story is very very very beautiful~ I thought Taem just lonely because he said that his mom was overprotective, but I didn't think he's sick!
and my heart broke when he said 'he's tired'. I don't want him die, but I can't bear to see him suffer any longer due to sickness. oh poor Taeminnie... T_______T

Thanks for sharing this story~

[mariposa02]

thank you very much and lol at your mom :D

[tkdstar123]

I absolutely LOVED this fic. I haven't read a good angst in SO long and this was like a breath of fresh air. Even though I cried buckets towards the end, it was still really nice. When a fic makes me feel this emotional, it's more likely to stick with me in the long run. I know I'll be back to reread this again and again!

Thank you <3

[mariposa02]

thank you very much I'm glad that my fic could touch you and I'm sorry for making you cry >.<
♥

[alsie_09]

aww... this made me cry.. i hope they will see each other again.. i love ur fic. :)

[mariposa02]

well I hope so too lol. thank you ♥

[limmet]

*sobs* I knew it.. but even so... Taemin's death is heartbreaking... *sobs*
Beautiful fic, I really enjoyed reading it.

[mariposa02]

I'm glad that this fic seemed to have touched you :D thank you for readingand commenting ♥ /hands tissue

[bakagreenirene]

wow...like simply wow, that was like the most heartbreaking thirty minutes of my life!!! geez i haven't cried like that in a while :(

i'm just going to say that your writing is simply breathtaking. I actually didn't cry when taemin physically died in the fic but it was during those quiet moments throughout the story that still managed to impart such an emotional intensity (ie. when taemin whispers to minho "why are you here?") like something just set off in my brain and i started crying like crazy. It was so weird. But so awesome. idk

anyways great job!!! hope you can write more fics in the future :)

[mariposa02]

thank you very much I'm so glad that I managed to touch you that much :)

Yes, I'll keep writing :D