Between what you want and what you need - Jongkey/Onkey [1/1]

[mariposa02]

Between what you want and what you need | Jongkey, Onkey | r | 4800+ au, angst, smut, drama, romance,  | unbeta-ed ,swearing, pregnancy

Comments

OMG

[mizukodomo]

This was beautiful.. Mistakes or no, this was beautifully written. I don't read many Gwiboon stories, and this just struck me as an intriguing story plot line. you did a beautiful, masterful job and I applaud your sincerity and sensitivity while writing. Thank you thank you thank you for sharing <3

I'm still amazed
MK

Re: OMG

[mariposa02]

thank you very much :)

[meridianslair]

i cant even..

wha.. TT-TT WHY

brb sobbing in a corner

[mariposa02]

/wipes tears away

[scarredknees]

god, this is beautiful. i...ide. ): and sad. and absolutely gorgeous.

There is that feeling you have when you are standing between the man you think you want and the man you think you need and both of them look at you as if they want and need you so badly and they despise you for it because they want you to belong to them
that was probably my favorite part. it was worded so well and amazingly and beautifully and it was tragic and realistic and i just have so many feelings right now. kudos, this is amazing, painful, and just beautiful. :( i use the word beautiful far too much. maybe i should just stop rambling and just tell you straight: i loved this so much. ♥

[mariposa02]

wow.
thank you so much ♥

[jongkey81]

Despite english is not your native language.. you doing fine here... there might be some places a bit confusing but yet I understanding & feel the angst... poor gwiboon but i'm glad she is strong enough to overcome all & look forward. ^^

[mariposa02]

thank you :D

[mariposa02]

thanks :D