The process of Entirety- A BDS fic.

[papyrus4sirus]

Author: Krystal ( papyrus4sirus )
Rating: R
Fandom: The Boondock Saints
Disclaimer: Mr. Duffy has all the rights while I have none, and completely without permission, this tale I have spun.  
Warnings: Twincest. Some language.
Summary: Same day of Rocco’s demise, Connor fears his twin’s grief will be both their undoing. Hurt/comfort.

Note: This is my first BDS fic

Comments

[dominiondreams]

Oh that was just perfect!

[moit]

Welcome to the fandom! I loved this fic so much, I hope I don't overwhelm you with my comment. Lines I loved:

worried that his other half may never look the same again

He wanted to reach past flesh and hold murphys soul

He and Murphy were two halves to a whole. They had always been connected on the basis of being twins, and it only came naturally that to extend that connection further was important and necessary, it was whatever they needed.

I absolutely love the overt confirmation of "two halves of the same whole" of the twins. I love, LOVE the idea that twins really are two halves of the same whole, and I love the fact that you take the time to address this.

They kissed one another sealing this truth together, locking it with love.

The greatest relief came when Murphy smiled at Connor, and in that moment he knew he would not lose his brother, no matter the trials they suffered.The last line was so fecking brilliant

[papyrus4sirus]

Thank you both very much, and I greatly appreciate constructive criticism. Cheers! :)

[papyrus4sirus]

LOL sorry for your brain melting, or am I? :D

Thank you very much for the encouragement and I'm glad you liked it. I just might right more; my current obsession with the Boondock Saints doesn't seem like it's going to end any time soon, so that's a good sign.

[papyrus4sirus]

Lol well that Icon of yours is pretty damn Inspiring. In fact, I think thats one of the best one's I've seen.

[galadhfea]

Aww, I read this one over on FF.net and I was a jerk and didn't review there, but yes. Still love it. I'm not usually one to read BDS twincest to be honest, but this one is lovely and shows the deep connection between the brothers. Love how you show how Murph's moods affect Connor so profoundly.

[papyrus4sirus]

Aw shucks *blushes* Thank you for your very kind words, you have made my day. :)

[boondockshay]

please write more =)

[papyrus4sirus]

Aaaww, well I actually am working on another something. I'm trying to make it longer then a one shot though. Also, I've seen your icon around and don't know if I've ever said it, but I love it!!

[boondockshay]

weeeeeeeeeeeee.....awesome =) thanks I love the icon, Reedus is like my sexual God =) would do anythign for that man =P cheers !!!!!!!!