Comments | parable91: Dark Frontier

parable91

Dark Frontier

Sep 21, 2009 22:26

America was dreaming the Dream again. He hated the Dream. He could not be happy in the Dream, he could not be carefree or optimistic. The Dream gave him nothing to be happy about. For all his strength and his can-do attitude he was powerless to change what the Dream showed him. America would have face the Dream head on, like always ( Read more... )

fanfic, america, vietnam

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parable91 September 22 2009, 17:55:50 UTC

Well, it is America's dream of shameful memories. Guess I did it right.

seebearrun September 23 2009, 02:20:01 UTC

Wow, you invoke great imagery between Alfred and the eagle and the history between Alfred and Vietnam; just the way they tied into each other made this interesting to read.

parable91 September 24 2009, 02:40:41 UTC

Thank you very much.

seileach67 September 25 2009, 05:48:11 UTC

I loved this over on the Kink Meme and I'm glad to see it here. Good to see Alfred facing up to things and trying to do better. Looking forward to reading the rest! <3

parable91 September 25 2009, 05:55:43 UTC

Dude, you seriously posted this the second after I put up the second part. Go ahead and read it! Any comments would be appreciated. I can't improve unless people tell me what to d better!