7 notebooks filled; written/action

[ectobabble]

[this morning finds Ray in the lobby, a pile of books beside him on the couch as he watches everyone mill around. occasionally, he'll scribble in a notebook in his lap if someone particularly interesting wanders past ... he's collecting character descriptions. after a minute, he'll reach for one of the other books, meaning to grab his plot

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[foolreversed]

Hey, the murder can totally happen right away in the plot! I always liked it more when the mystery got straight to business and then used the murder to develop and reveal things about the characters to make them more interesting!

[ectobabble]

Hmmmm, that's not such a bad idea. I might give it a shot, see if it plays out with the rest of the plot. I don't want to stretch it too thin, though. Y'know?