Comments | paradox_fantasy: Like a Moth to the Flame [Himawari, Doumeki, Watanuki, Yuuko; PG]

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Like a Moth to the Flame [Himawari, Doumeki, Watanuki, Yuuko; PG]

Oct 08, 2009 10:41

Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Author: doumeki
Fandom: xxxHOLiC
Characters: Himawari, Doumeki, Watanuki, Yuuko
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers up to 186. Sorry.
A/N: Written for curious_robin for round 6 of dimension_shop. I'd been wanting to write something like this for a while, and her prompts gave me the motivation to write it. ♥

( She thinks it's only appropriate that it rains the night he falls. )

fandom: xxxholic, author: sherri

Comments 6

grey_lily October 9 2009, 05:43:25 UTC

I really like this, I really enjoy how you have captured Himwari's thoughts. The end line is so very sad, i don't think that Watanuki would leave the shop now even for Himawari... I wonder if he would even do it for Doumeki?

stillskies October 10 2009, 00:01:57 UTC

He wouldn't. Tsubasa kind of explains it. ^^;;

But I'm glad you liked it! ♥ I love Himawari.

sinnatious October 9 2009, 10:21:21 UTC

This was lovely.

You really got inside Himawari's head. I liked how she dealt with and thought about the scars. It was sad, and bittersweet, and haunting, and I'm running out of adjectives so I'm just going to go sit in a corner and be quiet and just THINK about this all night. o__o

stillskies October 10 2009, 00:03:12 UTC

♥ Thank you! ♥

rinhail October 9 2009, 14:29:13 UTC

Oh this was too much goodness. You captured Himawari so well. I really do hope with all my heart these characters get some kind of happy ending.

stillskies October 10 2009, 00:03:46 UTC

So do I. ♥ Thanks for reading!