you are the moon

Jan 18, 2010 16:18

you are the moon
paralyzing_time
romance, fluff; pg; kihae
3011 words
kibum wonders what donghae’s voice sounds like.
notes: i needed to stop my smut factory for a while. my first kihae! and the longest thing i've ever finished, even if it isn't that long.

The first time Kibum meets Donghae, he’s sitting in the library by himself, in an unnoticeable corner away from all the other kids studying for exams. )

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convicted_eyes January 19 2010, 01:27:27 UTC
This is...reih;rthihg;ohghiruhgutrhihghsrgnvnvrbuhr

if you're wondering what ^ that is...it's me not being able to comprehend the amount of cute and love that filled my heart with ^_^
It was beautiful!

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paralyzing_time January 19 2010, 02:25:54 UTC
XD I shall cherish your keyboard smash! ♥

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ^^

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kingdra January 19 2010, 01:34:12 UTC
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH ♥ ♥ ♥
i loved this so much.
though i think you should make kibum be able to hear donghae in the end.
even though that's like, metaphysically impossible or whatever D< wah.
ILOVED; ♥
^^

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paralyzing_time January 19 2010, 02:27:31 UTC
Originally I was going to end it with Kibum gaining his hearing back, but it didn't fit the ending I planned for this, so the idea was discarded. D: Plus, I am quite lazy and that would take a while to write >>

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^ ♥

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genisaurion January 19 2010, 01:36:56 UTC
Mood killer: I sorta laughed when Kibum and Donghae were exchanging texts. Idek, I just found out amusing that Kibum had a phone. XS

That aside, omfg this was so brilliant/beautiful. I'm so glad I read this. And when I finish leaving this comment, I'm reading it a second time ^^~

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genisaurion January 19 2010, 01:47:06 UTC
It was just as beautiful the second time around T______T

//goes off to stalk your other fics

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paralyzing_time January 19 2010, 02:19:39 UTC
Thank you~ <3

MY OTHER FICS ARE HORRENDOUS. DON'T GO THERE.

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razi_a January 19 2010, 02:09:16 UTC
Awwwwwwww ;_______;

So pretty, and it broke my heart a little. But I still loved it ♥

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paralyzing_time January 19 2010, 02:25:00 UTC
I'm sorry, dear. :( *fixes heart* Thank you so much! ♥

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happytgt January 19 2010, 03:12:28 UTC
-plays donghae's beautiful solo-

This was totally beautiful, I enjoyed reading every single word of this. It's just breathtaking the way you capture kihae's interactions despite kibum being deaf and mute.

Really really beautiful♥

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paralyzing_time January 19 2010, 04:15:50 UTC
D'awww, thank you so much, sweetie. ♥ I was hoping that their interaction was okay.

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