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Sweet as Sin

Jul 16, 2007 20:18

AkuRoku, how I love it. This was written for the loverly chiiaroscuro, who is amazing and awesome and made of win. Enjoy~

( Perhaps the worst part is that it's all his fault. )

fanfiction, akuroku, drabbles

Comments 16

minaclueless July 17 2007, 04:13:25 UTC

D;
It's gorgeous in its inner perspectiveness. I especially like Axel's various nicknames for Roxas.

parametric July 17 2007, 21:40:55 UTC

♥ I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

lewdness July 17 2007, 04:59:50 UTC

♥ Ow, baby~

lewdness July 17 2007, 05:05:08 UTC

Haha, screw you too LJ.

Anyway, what came after the ~ was something like, "aewljsfijo the nicknames for Roxas that Axel had were painful beyond all reason. You see less of him being a snarky bastard that's still IC and still cares for Roxas in a twisted way, than you do of just him being a bastard, or of him being a total OOC sap. You hit the mark perfectly here. ♥ The little details about how they 'tamed' Roxas hurt too, because I can see where Axel would want the old Roxas back- not some new nice!Roxas. Lovely job." SCREWWW LJ.

parametric July 17 2007, 21:43:51 UTC

*blushes deeply* Oh, sweeting! I'm so glad you liked it, and thought that Axel was well-characterized. Nicknames can be a way of degrading someone, and that's kind of what I was trying to show here. Thank you so much for the lovely comment, I'm so happy it met with your approval!

darktradgedy13 July 17 2007, 05:06:14 UTC

Your words are always so beautiful, Ria. They paint the picture of Axel's torn and ravished emotions so well. We know exactly what he's feeling, even if he doesn't quite understand it or want to feel it himself.

Poor, poor Axel. You never really understand what you have until it's gone, do you? Then being left with the feeling of not being good enough or not knowing what to do with yourself... It's wretched, to say the least.

I think your perspective on their relationship is very interesting. Awesome job, Ria. <3

parametric July 17 2007, 21:46:14 UTC

>////< Thank you, you're too kind, I swear! And yup, I liked writing Axel here (in some twisted way) because it really did feel right, and emotional, and everything. Trying to deny it, to deny that Roxas matters to him, and in the end failing miserably.

I'm glad you liked it, dear! ♥

neffervescent July 17 2007, 14:25:15 UTC

Oh, wow.

That's just... wow.

I really liked the writing and just everything.

parametric July 17 2007, 21:46:46 UTC

♥ Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

x_unfinished_x July 17 2007, 14:49:57 UTC

If it were possible to send small agonized mental thrashes via the internet, this is where I would do that.

95% of your Zemyx drabbles made me cry and/or experience small mental "Oh my god. Her writing is so awesome. >w<" spasms. This fic made me thrash about and subsequently crave comfort food due to the incredibly IC angst. I mean, c'mon. IC ANGST. And Axel's nicknames for Roxas, and the way he described him, and... and... okay, I'm bad at writing coherent comments. But, still. You = and hearts semicolon.

The moment I hit "Post Comment" I'm going to reread this.

parametric July 17 2007, 21:49:37 UTC

Oooooooooh! *blushes deeply* Oh, I'm so glad you commented! I like knowing that people like my work, and that it does affect them. I'm happy you liked this piece! XD For some reason, I really seem to let out a lot when I write angst, and I obsess over characterization, so I'm glad you thought it was still IC. Really, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. ♥