Contest (02, Rivalry, Axel/Roxas)

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Title: Contest
Prompt: 02. Rivalry // Catch me if you can
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Characters: Axel and Roxas
Word Count: 307
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: 30_confessions has been calling to me lately, and I'm really wanting to get those 200 or so drabbles I have to do knocked down in the next few weeks. Or at least a good portion. Enjoy!

Comments

[darktradgedy13]

I can totally picture this fight in my head. I love the way you describe them. It's just... how Roxas picks up on everything Axel is, and vise versa. It's lovely.

You keep distracting me on AIM. I can't get this out. XD

Well, in any case, I love your description. It really sets the mood for the scene and paints a wondrous picture of the action. Lovely job, Ria. <3

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Awwww. ♥ You make me feel so loved, m'dear! And hey, you managed it in the end and it was fun anyway. :3

I'm glad you liked it. Descriptions are fuuuuuuun~ thank you so much! ♥

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Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Why, no! But thank you very much~ ♥

[pikagalmish]

Ahhh~~, I can so see this happening between the two of them. The way that you wove this together is simply lovely, and makes for a great, quick read. And when was the last time that you posted AkuRoku? x____o;;;

New icon!! *points*

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Ah, thank you! I do think that the two of them have a very physical relationship, I mean aside from just sex. Sparring strikes me as something they'd consider a getting-closer time or something. And I posted an AkuRoku about a week ago, Sweet as Sin.

♥ Icons are love.

[nuvolaluz]

Beautiful. I'd have to say that Axel is my favorite character (even more than Sora or Roxas!) and I love your descriptiosn of him here. It also takes a lot of patience to write actual conflict (read:battle) and I applaud you for it.

Call me later?
I need to ask you a favor.

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Ohhhh! *blushes* Thank you~ Axel's definitely one of my favorites too. I'm glad you liked it! Tell ya a secret, though - I love writing battle scenes. I could've been a lot more detailed with this if I'd wanted, but it would have taken away from the piece in my opinion. I spent a lot of time in martial arts learning about all sorts of weapons, though, so it's not very difficult for me to imagine fight scenes and write 'em.

Sure! I'm free all day. I tried a little bit ago, but you didn't answer. ♥

[joyless_euphora]

YESSEMEROXAS. I love you for it. <3

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Roxas on top is SUCH love. You KNOW he only bottoms if he wants to. ♥