Pansinin Mo Ko, Kouhai - Oneshot - Kris x Tao

Aug 25, 2013 15:58

Title: Pansinin mo ko, kouhai
Author: paranoiascreams
Chapters: oneshot
Genre: fluff. Implied smut
Warning: unbeta’d. Hindi ako masiyadong marunong magkwento in Tagalog.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Kris x Tao, Sehun x Luhan
Synopsis: Suplado raw si Tao, at wala siyang balak pansinin ang mga tao sa paligid nya, maski yung isang tao na nakuha ang atensyon ( Read more... )

pairing: sehun x luhan, pairing: kris x tao, !fanfiction, length: oneshot, band: exo

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chromesynth September 1 2013, 15:53:26 UTC
In fairness, di ko sila kilala pero naaliw ako ng bongga. Dami kong tawa dito mama rofl :DDD Kyut din ng interactions nila, so fluffeeeehhhh ♥

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paranoiascreams September 2 2013, 00:55:39 UTC
alam mo yung seryosong nagdouble take ako kung sino yung nagcomment. XD inisip ko pa kung nahack ba account mo. hahahaha.

miss you na anak~

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tsubon September 6 2013, 21:42:29 UTC
It took me a while to read this bc, how do I Tagalog, oh man. I even had to look up stuff OTL

Did they do it? I wasn't too sure on that, but Tao woke up hurting and sticky and that could be explained w/out sex, but still. And if they did, wow, Duizhang, you moves fast! XD Actually, even without sex giving a key to his place is still going fast. Smooth moves, Kris, totally.

Also, ugh, I can totally relate to Tao, just because I'm quiet around new people doesn't mean I'm stuck up or mean or w/e ^^;

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paranoiascreams September 7 2013, 00:38:22 UTC
they actually had sex. Kris is naked next to tao and YES. kris is smooth. XD

me too. im usually judged immediately whenever im quiet or something.

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chubbycescanut September 8 2013, 04:51:15 UTC
and cute!!
Nakakatawa at sobrang cute~
Gusto ko talaga yung mga couple
Ewan ko ba kung bakit parang mas nakakatawa kapag Tagalog yung dialogue pero grabehhhhh labs it so much
Si Luhan at Sehun ang cute! Sobrang arte lol nakakatawa talaga!
At si Tao and Yifan, ang cute~ THIS STORY IS JUST SO CUTE OK

labs it so much~
GREAT JOBBBB~~<3
Ipapabasa ko nga sa kaibigan ko lol

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paranoiascreams September 9 2013, 01:23:17 UTC
Thank you~

YEY! Spread the love. ^_^

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