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[paranoidpenguin]

so why is my roommate the worst writer ever. aside from failing to master basic agreement she likes to switch tenses with no warning. she takes like 9 hours to write 1 paragraph bc shes been working on this paper since yesterday and if you take out everything ive written shed be left with about 2 pages of shit vs the 4 pages of loverlyness she

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[athena92595]

OMG...I know this is an old entry...but I hate it when people ask me to read something and it's basically a bunch of shit and then I have to tell them that they've switch tenses and that there using the wrong they're and that they write like they are kids and they are redundant again and again and they're sentences are runons!!!