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wordfear October 24 2009, 04:20:19 UTC
What a gorgeous story! I really liked the ideas in this, and especially the way the dream conversations helped weave into the canon of their building friendship and trust. I also really loved how you detailed the different parts of Dean's soul - it could have really been OTT yet the writing is beautifully judged and true to character (I particularly loved when Dean's fear shot Cas and he still smiled!). Also liked the sense of the building complexity of what is happening amongst the Angels. This story sits comfortably within the established events but adds so much depth and colour to them. Just lovely.

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parenthetical October 25 2009, 19:28:42 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! It makes me very happy that you enjoyed it. :D

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brightbear October 24 2009, 15:17:07 UTC
This was really good. The relationship develops so slowly over the course of the story and there are so many details present. And there's a happy ending :)

Am definitely adding to memories.

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parenthetical October 25 2009, 19:30:32 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

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innie_darling October 26 2009, 01:47:43 UTC
Such a cool idea, and the writing totally did justice to it.

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parenthetical October 31 2009, 16:05:55 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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enigmaticblues October 27 2009, 09:02:35 UTC
This was truly beautiful. I loved your vision of the fragments of Dean's soul, and the way Castiel convinced him to heal himself.

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parenthetical October 31 2009, 16:06:51 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I'm happy it worked for you. :D

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damerel November 1 2009, 10:41:14 UTC
I enjoyed this very much. Each fragment of Dean's splintered soul remained recognisably Dean, which is a real achievement on your part. :) I did laugh rather a lot at the baser desires part. And thank you for finally providing a plausible explanation for why Castiel gets zapped back to Heaven.

Lovely. Thank you. :)

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parenthetical November 1 2009, 23:31:36 UTC
Wooo, thank you so much! I'm glad it worked for you and you enjoyed it. :D

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