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parka_girl

Collapsing At Your Doorstep

Oct 25, 2011 21:55

Title: Collapsing At Your Doorstep
Fandom: Sports/Cycling RPF
Rating: PG-13/R
Pairing: Ben Swift/Peter Kennaugh (Geraint Thomas/Edvald Boasson Hagen)
Disclaimer: This is not real, this never happened. I don't know them and this is all fiction. Made up stuff.
Notes: This is for the zombiebang. This is part of the cyclinsts + zombies au, click the tag for ( Read more... )

peter kennaugh, cyclists + zombies au, edvald boasson hagen, geraint thomas, cycling, ben swift

Comments 2

glitterburn November 15 2011, 20:10:10 UTC

This was a really clever way to end the series - by having the survivors turn on one another through fear and anger.

(also there was a noise outside just now and I jumped a mile LMAO)

I liked Ben's weary, no-nonsense voice and the way he takes charge and cares for G and Eddy even though he's heartbroken. I like how he turns that pain into fuel to get him through the situation, the way he's built up these defences only for them to crumble when he sees Peter on the other side of the glass (such a great horror film trope and very effective here). I also liked the supporting cast, especially Isabella.

And! I liked the artwork on this - the use of the image of the grass with the hand slowly coming out of it works really well as a scene break!

parka_girl November 15 2011, 22:36:17 UTC

I might someday write more, but I think you're right, this does make a good ending (and it explains why I haven't wanted to write any more in this verse, because this one is so ... complete, as it were).

(LOL! Sorry!)

he way he's built up these defences only for them to crumble when he sees Peter on the other side of the glass (such a great horror film trope and very effective here).
That was one of the scenes I thought was either going to be totally cliche or great, I'm glad it was the latter. And when I reread it, I was like, OMG Peter! Even though I obviously know what's going to happen (and yes, I am someone who rereads her fics a lot).

And! I liked the artwork on this - the use of the image of the grass with the hand slowly coming out of it works really well as a scene break!
I totally LOVE the artwork! I was kind of worried because no one had picked my fic, but then someone did and she went above and beyond the call of duty for art and everything was just so perfect! :D