Not Entirely Human Error - Part 10

Mar 12, 2008 14:55


So much inspiration this week! My favorite authors have updates - Yay! - so I'm going to update too, before I get too intimidated by all the great stuff coming out.

TITLE:  Not Entirely Human Error - Part 10
AUTHOR:  parkermonster
PAIRING:  House/Chase
RATING:  Hard PG-13, for language
NOTES:  Spoilers for Human Error, and everything that leads up to ( Read more... )

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seftimiu March 12 2008, 22:37:55 UTC
At least there's PROGRESS! /cheers them on/ /cheers YOU on/

WOOT! Thank you for updating! I really love to read this story! :D Thank you thank you thank you!

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parkermonster March 13 2008, 01:20:01 UTC
No, thank YOU! You've been feeding my Chase habit incredibly well. I haven't commented nearly enough because I'm actually many entries behind in my reading (something to do with spending all my time writing, maybe?). I can't even write lame stuff that fast, much less the high quality you manage. Wow.

I'm glad my humble effort works for you. I get the sense that you and I have some similar views on the characters, so I'm flattered that you like this!

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morgan_d March 12 2008, 22:46:41 UTC
Oh, so happy to see an update. Great chapter, really promising. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Is it just for me, or did LJ swallow a few words of text? This is what I see:

“Ugh. Your image is much worse than mine. And under normal circumstances, I’d figure you were right. The strangest part of this is…” Wilson stopped for a moment. “Not to betray any confidences, but he likes you. He wants you to like him. And he just doesn’t have a clue how to make that happen.”
get that. He’s had his chances before and totally blown me off. I can’t wrap my head around this current business, supposedly so we can be…best mates or something. No offense.”

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parkermonster March 13 2008, 01:26:20 UTC
Dang it, LJ! You are indeed correct, discerning reader, and I've gone back to fix the line, which should read, “You see, I just don’t get that...etc, etc. I've been having problems with LJ changing my fonts and rearranging my spacing - I've even watched it happen when I hit the Save Entry button! How I can copy and paste the whole chapter and have a few words drop out of the middle is beyond me.

Oh well. Deep breath, blood pressure coming down now.

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Major icon!love!

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seldra March 12 2008, 23:12:03 UTC
Yay new chapter! I love this fic! Your dialogue is so much fun, and then you have these wonderful insights into their characters....I can't wait for Part 11...

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parkermonster March 13 2008, 01:48:07 UTC
Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing the dialogue - these characters have such distinct voices, I just listen to them in my head.

OK, I hope that didn't sound TOO psychotic.

You might enjoy knowing that I spent a couple of hours last night putting together ROF clips from his episodes. I'm going to post it to my journal later tonight. Love that guy!

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tierry_leoine March 13 2008, 00:49:03 UTC
Ahhh...it's great.

House being his chamingly crazy and obnoxious self versus Chase being all grown up and smart-assed :D lovely.

The pager non-conversation is very much beloved.

Love the fic. Hope to get the next chapter soooooooooooooooon.

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parkermonster March 13 2008, 01:51:56 UTC
Glad you liked the pager conversation. It's just something House would do, IMO. He's gonna have to talk to Chase face-to-face next chapter, though (and it's in the works).

Thanks for reading!

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snowflakespeech March 13 2008, 02:35:02 UTC
*does happy dance* IT'S AN UPDATE! WHOOO! I loved it!

This: “He-Who-Must-Not-Be Named is driving you crazy, I take it? I thought that was supposed to be his destination.”

Wilson slumped in his seat and rubbed his temples. “He went there, brought it back, and passed it around. I can’t take this much longer. I will have to kill him soon and then none of it will matter.”

Was freaking brilliant! I also loved the pager convo. toward the end! I hope you can update again soon! Great job!

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parkermonster March 13 2008, 03:12:46 UTC
Thanks you! Any time I can inspire the happy dance I'm proud of myself!

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