[Fic] Drive

Jan 18, 2012 01:50

Sooo... long time no fic! ^^;; Idk why but I've had a tough time writing recently. But I also got into Formula 1 last year, so I decided to do a little AU based around that. XD It started as a few drabbles... and of course, as always happens with me, it got out of hand. XD So here is nearly 11000 words of racing driver AU. Enjoy!

Title: Drive
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fic, au, subaru yasu/subaru, yasu

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elyndys January 21 2012, 23:50:50 UTC
Aww thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though you're not into racing :) But maybe that could change~~ ;D

I really appreciate your very kind words, thank you!

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silentchord January 18 2012, 12:55:21 UTC
Ah, Koichi. No Johnny's related F1 AU would be complete without you. XD

I love that you gave Subaru and Yasu a long-distance relationship. What with Subaru having his band and Yasu having to be in a different country every few weeks. You completely made it work. And Baru's slow burn of wanting to be there to see Yasu race and understand the sport was so believable. The crash made me worry, but I knew you wouldn't hurt Yasu or do that to Baru. ;D

Eeee, Jonny Wakely! XD Going to pretend Jonny is short for Jonathan and that he's my brother. Yes. ;3

Such a joy to read. I now can't stop smiling, haha.

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elyndys January 21 2012, 23:53:49 UTC
Phew, I'm really glad you liked it - I was a bit nervous about you reading it cos I fudged the actual race scenes just to make my life easier and I knew most people wouldn't know any better XD So I'm really happy you enjoyed!

Hee I did think I remembered your brother being Jonathan and somehow Jonny Wakely just seemed to sound good XD Thank you for lending me him (and your name)! XD

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! ♥

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neitaro January 18 2012, 15:10:55 UTC
I LOVE IT! I dunno much about racing but I love every bit of it!
I dunno if I already said this before, but I don't really read fanfics about real people, only animes! But I must say that yasuba fanfics are the only ones that I could ever read! And yours are my most favorites <333

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elyndys January 22 2012, 00:02:41 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it even though you don't like racing - or RPS! XD I'm really happy you've been enjoying my fics - it's the power of Yasuba, they're too irresistible! ;D

Thanks so much for commenting! ♥

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wintersdancer January 18 2012, 17:28:02 UTC
I really like how you developped the story here :) And I think the amount of F1 related stuff was in the right dose :D Also, I found the idea of a driver!Yasu very nice :D
Thanks for sharing!

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elyndys January 22 2012, 00:16:45 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it and didn't think there was too much car talk! ;D Thanks for commenting! ♥

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moka_n_waffles January 19 2012, 00:21:02 UTC
I read this on my phone while going home earlier and LORD, MY EYES HURT LOL. XD

It was a lovely story!! I liked the long-distance relationship and also how Subaru starts feeling kind of bad because he didn't really pay much attention to the things Yasu was so passionate about, while Yasu seemed to keep track of everything Subaru was doing even though there was a lot on his mind already. I'm glad Subaru ended up understanding how important the races were to Yasu and how he made an effort to become part of that.

The accident part had me all shaken, omg. I'm glad nothing serious happened! And I loved the ending, their decision and all, it was really sweet - specially seeing that Subaru seems to be okay with the possibility of leaving his life in Japan behind to stay with Yasu.

Ugh, my English is broken, I'm sleepy. Anyway, thanks a lot for writing :)

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elyndys January 22 2012, 00:26:06 UTC
Oh no! Don't sue me! XD Thank you for such dedication! ;)

I'm really happy you enjoyed the fic! ♥ Aww and you know I could never do anything too bad to either of them~ Especially not Yasu lol >.> Thank you so much for such a lovely comment, it makes me really happy you liked it! :D

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