Comments | partmermaid: Fanfic: November 29th 2006, 2:30 a.m. (Nine/Rose)

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Fanfic: November 29th 2006, 2:30 a.m. (Nine/Rose)

Jul 03, 2011 02:00

Title: November 29th 2006, 2:30 a.m.
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Rating: G
Genre: Slice of life/fluff
Wordcount: 1086
Author's notes: Written for the 2011 Doctor/Rose Summer Fixaton at doctor_rose_fix, photo prompt by strange_charmed.

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Comments 4

strange_charmed July 3 2011, 19:47:47 UTC

This is adorable! This is wonderful - I think you did an exquisite job with the prompt!!! =D

It's a small detail, but I love how you work in their canon!clothing - Rose's scarf from Boomtown, her hat from the end of TCI, the goofy headlamp even! =D

I love that Nine is becoming so much more domestic than he was at the end of WW3 - he's trying to gently convince her to come away with him rather than basically being like "OK I'm leaving, you coming or not?" I love that change in their relationship here =) And I love that this is their "2am" moment - quite literally! =D And I love the role reversal!

and he had to do something - anything - he...

All he dared do was reach out and brush his knuckles across her cheek.

I love this line! You really did a great job with this - thanks for taking the prompt! =D

partmermaid July 6 2011, 09:20:44 UTC

Aw, this comment made my week. :D Thank you!

And thanks for making this prompt, writing about winter in the sweltering heat was a fun challenge. :P

zazie11 July 7 2011, 15:33:43 UTC

Oh, I loves me some Nine/Rose UST!

"'Twas still nice though," Rose mused softly, her eyes vaguely staring at the distance. "Everything's much nicer when I'm with you. Even home."

The Doctor felt something burst within him, and for one shining moment every fibre of his being yearned to kiss her sleepy eyes, her cold pink cheeks, her chapped lips. It was wrong and impossible and now she was looking at him and he hoped she couldn't tell (he hoped she could tell), and he had to do something - anything - he...

All he dared do was reach out and brush his knuckles across her cheek.

And -

It was odd, but as he walked back towards the TARDIS, all that snow and all those buildings and the freezing, dark silence didn't seem the least bit remarkable.

That last line is shiptastic! :D

partmermaid July 16 2011, 18:27:59 UTC

Ah, UST - drives me crazy but I love every minute of it! Thanks. :D