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Into the Fold, Chapter Thirty-two

Mar 03, 2010 10:05

Title: Into the Fold
Author: Pasi
Rating: 15
Category: Gen
Fic Summary: Severus Snape is going straight to hell. The people he calls his friends are helping him get there.
Chapter Summary: Healer Meed experiences Severus's emotions.

Chapter Index

( Chapter Thirty-two: The Veil of Tears )

into the fold

Comments 3

librasmile March 4 2010, 07:52:37 UTC

Once again you wind me up and leave me begging for more. WOW. What a fantastic way of describing spell creation. How long did you think about that? It was VERY...clever isn't a good enough word...ingenious is better. Well, well done. I can't wait to see how you show the construction of the counter curse.

Can't wait for Chapter 33.

pasi March 4 2010, 13:29:30 UTC

Thank you! It didn't take long to think of the ideas for the chapter, but it did take a while to make them intelligible.

Can't wait for Chapter 33.

Eep, sorry! Chap. 33 is in the First War timeline, not the Marauder timeline.

librasmile March 4 2010, 17:31:06 UTC

>>>>>>Thank you! It didn't take long to think of the ideas for the chapter, but it did take a while to make them intelligible.>>>>>>

Well the image and operation of the Veil of Tears is just rivetting. I won't forget that any time soon. Lovely image!

>>>>Eep, sorry! Chap. 33 is in the First War timeline, not the Marauder timeline.>>>>>

Ack!!!! Ya KILLIN' me here, lol :^)p Fine, I'm in it for the long haul [pulls out the lawn chair and newspaper]