Comments | pasiphile: Fic: Double Vision

pasiphile

Fic: Double Vision

Dec 05, 2012 20:39

Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Characters: Sally Donovan, others
Pairing(s): surprise!
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sally Donovan isn’t quite what she seems.
Warnings: Character death, explicit language, police corruption,
Word count: 1661

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rating:pg-13, fanfiction, sally donovan, fandom: sherlock

Comments 4

keerawa December 6 2012, 05:46:36 UTC

Nicely done.

pasiphile January 19 2013, 16:45:33 UTC

Glad it worked for you!

holyfant December 31 2012, 11:05:51 UTC

Mmmm. Donovan-fic. Lovely.

I like your style a lot; it's clean and light - and because the 'S' on her necklace stumped me a bit I didn't quite figure out who she was until the end, which is perfect :D

pasiphile January 19 2013, 16:45:15 UTC

Sally Donovan always needs more love. That's just a fact. All the women in Sherlock do, but Donovan especially, IMO.
I'm glad you liked the style, it's something I'm still trying to figure out: I like stark prose, but there's always the risk of it getting boring. And I'm relieved the reveal wasn't obvious, it's always a bit of a gamble when you write something like this.