and now how could i let things get this out of hand part 1/?

[passion_indepth]

Title: and now how could i let things get this out of hand
Part: 1/?
Pairing: Harry/Louis, Louis/Eleanor
Word Count: 2,394
Rating: PG
Warnings: mentions of sex, slight cursing
Disclaimer: I do not own One Direction (or any of the band members individually), Eleanor and well, you all know the drill.
A/N: hello. this is my first fic (for this fandom, anyway

Comments

[puddleduck_01]

Oh goodness, this is amazing!
I'm only new to this whole Larry Stylinson fan fiction thing, but I can honestly say I'm in love, and seeing a story so well written and so full of emotion is such an awesome gift to come across. Now, all I can add her is that the only way you could make me happier with such an awesome story is to make sure that Harry and Louis somehow find each other again and Louis realises once and for all that he has to grow up and win Harry back for real. Because seriously, they're to cute and adorable and perfect and seeing them without each other is like eating dirt, which I've never done but never want to do either. Okay, sorry, I'm not going to rant anymore, but really, fucking amazing writing up here! :)

[passion_indepth]

oh my gosh, thank you so much! you don't know how much this means to me!
and yes, i, too, can't stand to leave this at that. for some reason, right now, i just can't keep them apart. hopefully, a happy ending is on the way! thanks again so much, you just made my day! :)

[kokoromiya7]

OMG Louis is such a fucking bastard !!! I'm so mad at him now, my poor baby Harry :( I hope he makes him pay for it because Louis doesn't deserve to be easily forgiven. Cheaters are the worst. And please, don't kill Harry or make him have an accident or something like that, i've read too many fics with this kind of overdramatic thing happening. I might sound sadistic but I really hope Harry will "torture" Louis, maybe make him jealous or just show him that he doesn't need him, idk (I still want an happy ending tho, because it's Larry Stylinson after all and I love them too much together). Can't wait for the next part, it was a nice start, good job ! :D

[passion_indepth]

hahaha don't worry, i wasn't planning on killing off harry in a tragic accident. i've read too many fics that ended that way too and to be honest, i never really liked it. but i honestly don't know how i'm gunna go about this yet! let's see what the inspiration brings, eh? thanks so much , btw, it means a lot! :)

[luminouso]

For a while back all I wanted was one tiny little prompt that went along these lines and now all of a sudden there are so many stories with bastard!Louis and poor angsty baby!Harry and I'm such a bad person for loving it as much as I do.
Seriously though, the feels! I can practically feel Harry crumbling as he tries to keep it together for his relationship but then he just gives up and I feel so sorry for him.
And as much as Louis is a complete idiot I get why he did it and I know that he's hurting too but I still just want to wrap Harry up and take him away from the world... And because of all of the fics I've read where she's portrayed like this I just don't like Eleanor. I'm sure she's lovely but to keep with my headcanon she's evil and must be kept out of the way. This was lovely though, in a heartbreaking way. And I'm sorry for the rambling. :) <3

[passion_indepth]

you understand why louis did it? you don't know how much that means to me! i mean, i was always scared that maybe the dynamics of the whole elounor "relationship" might not be clear here but thank you so much!

and just off the top of my head, i have this headcanon about harry crumbling to pieces. i think that harry kept cooking breakfast for lou, right? cause that's what he does, but after a while, the cooking just became sloppier and sloppier each time louis came home smelling of eleanor cause harry was so hurt. i think it had gotten to a point where louis did the unthinkable and actually stayed for breakfast at eleanor's, joking a bit about how he thinks harry's losing his touch. in my headcanon, that is what sort of prompted harry to finally speak up.

oops sorry for the rambling too! i just suddenly wanted to share that hahaha :)

[luminouso]

I totally understand, but I just don't sympathise with him even though Eleanor isn't "stressful" and shit it's just... God dammit Louis! >:|

I like your headcanon. I kind of want to live inside of your headcanon. Harry is just so precious though, he needs love and attention because he's delicate but Louis doesn't understand when he's being a dick! But yeah, still love this.

Sharing's caring!:D

[des_etincelles]

So is it ironic that the moment I began reading this, 'Need You Now' by Lady Antebellum started playing on the radio?
Yeah.
This is really heartbreaking. But so, so good. I always have Larry/ Elounor feels and yeah, this was just sjsjanusjdtdts

[passion_indepth]

oh maybe i should listen to that for inspiration on the next part! thank you so much. it's nice to know that i'm not the only one constantly plagued with larry/elounor feelings :(

[passion_indepth]

thaaaaank youuuuu so much i'm getting to work on that next part and hopefully louis isn't such a bastard anymore, eh?