much liked! (the line "its tears descending its leaves".. descending from its leaves?) just a thought, as that line seems to be missing something. i like how it goes from soft and contemplating things in nature that seem filled with sorrow, to how they're companions for your sorrow. teehee, yay.
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(the line "its tears descending its leaves".. descending from its leaves?)
just a thought, as that line seems to be missing something.
i like how it goes from soft and contemplating things in nature that seem filled with sorrow, to how they're companions for your sorrow. teehee, yay.
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