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[passionsofme]

The Lands Lesson

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[sapphireshards]

uhm, not one of your better ones. the idea is really good, and its worded awesomely, but everything is pretty much repeating what was said in the first stanza.... and it seems somewhat underdeveloped.
no im not saying its bad.
i'm saying it seems like it was thrown together in a matter of seconds without any real emotion or thought behind it.
*poke*