CONCRIT!

[pastrypop]

Happy autumn everyone! It's been a while so it's time for all us to have a...

*Johnny's Fanfic Concrit Meme*
Here you can give constructive criticism to authors in fandom! :D

Comments

[raining_helium]

I write Arashi, mainly Ohmiya. Here's my fic index.

Most of my stuff isn't very lengthy but this Sakuraiba fic is my longest and I'm personally fond of this Ohmiya one.

Thanks in advance!

[raining_helium]

your Ohmiya are to die for! I wish to read more from you! :D

[raining_helium]

Thanks! School has killed off my writing time, but I hope to write more soon too.

[raining_helium]

You have a great style and a wonderful way with words. I think you choose your words very carefully. On some occasions it does feel like you are overthinking a little and it's like we can feel the effort as a reader. You have beautiful and natural style so just go for what feels right to you. I look forward to reading what else you have in store for us!

[raining_helium]

Thanks for the critique! I think I get scared my words are too plain and repetitive, so in the future I'll keep your advice in mind and try to keep it natural :)

[raining_helium]

I know what you mean, but you have nothing to worry about! I love the way you put words together. I think you have such a lovely and charming style. I've never been bored reading your fic and I think your words are definitely not plain. Maybe I understated the love in the first comment. XD basically, you're great. Don't be afraid to trust yourself. <3

[raining_helium]

Don't worry, it's not critique if it's all just compliments :p Thanks so much, glad you enjoy reading my fic <3