Comments | patchworkgirl: i hate rhyme

patchworkgirl

i hate rhyme

Mar 29, 2005 21:31

you are kissing me swollen and sore
looking, face upturned, expectant and pure
we are losing our shirts to the mess on the floor
laughter seeping out through the cracks in the door

Comments 7

wretcheddoll March 30 2005, 09:07:51 UTC

patchworkgirl March 30 2005, 16:02:42 UTC

i know!!!! how come we didn't get together?!! i miss you madly. you should get your sweet-ass down here for a weekend visit. :)

patchworkgirl March 31 2005, 20:27:53 UTC

p.s. i'm thinking of writing a short story based on you and some of your experiences (with a bunch of other shit thrown in, mind you). you should call me on the cellophone and i will do research :).

greybird March 30 2005, 15:13:53 UTC

the rhythm in the third line is brilliant. also: i love klimt.
be well.

juice_faerie March 30 2005, 21:34:35 UTC

mmmm you.

and the icon. i'm lovin' it, mickeydees

anonymous April 1 2005, 07:14:02 UTC

Wow, the one night I'm not with you I sit up and read your whole Journal. I'm such a dork.

Random borrowedhaloxox July 3 2005, 21:23:14 UTC

Interesting :)