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[pateshie]

title hear me
count ~5000
a/n this is the one that ran away from me and i apologize in advance if it feels unfinished, uneventful or plain uninteresting.

Comments

[diamondacequeen]

The development of their relationship was so much fun to read. The awkwardness was freaking palpable, but Jinki was so professional about it. But I like that Minho and Jinki were an escape for each other. Minho got to forget about his unhappiness in life and Jinki got a break from the lonely pervs lol. And their connection was so genuine and caring. Even the freaking phone sex felt like it was all caring, but I think it made it better? At least to me it felt that way. It was totes natural. And I wish I could know what happens after Minho says he wants to meet! I think that first physical interaction would be interesting as well. I really liked this piece though. Phone sex operator Jinki is hot lol.

[pateshie]

i'm glad you thought the phone sex was alright! initially i felt (and still do feel) like it inhabits a rather grey area, with minho being a minor and so on, but i decided to include one that focussed more on the things they do have in common. i felt like it might lighten things up as well. thank you for reading, i'm happy you liked this!

[kaonashi_echo]

I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was great, how it makes me read more but let it to my imagination. It's sweet how you can find someone you really like and that can change your life in a completly differnt way in the most unusual places.

[pateshie]

i'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you so much for reading!

[ofcobalt]

i didn't want this to end wow i was scrolling with so much pain
you're an amazing writer i hope you know that

[pateshie]

thank you, i'm glad you liked it!

[rallyingpoint]

You had me at "call of booty." At first I thought it was silly, but it actually fit perfectly. ;u; Or not, because Jinki ended up more than just Minho's booty call.

And basically you summed up my headcanon for Jinki: "angelic one second and filthy the next," especially since his transformation to sexy, confident Jinki. He's switching images like a pro now. But it's touching he's neither truly angelic or filthy with Minho, just his natural, also conflicted, but hardworking self.

While it's good Minho has somehow found confidence to do who he wants, I wish he'd learn what he wants to. Because basing your happiness on another person's responses to you is not really happiness. I hope Jinki also teaches him that when they get together, which I know Jinki will allow. :)

This is a really nice fic. I had ~feels~ so I'd read it again when I crave more ~feels~

[pateshie]

oh god, so that was actually a wip title! i usually give my fics funny titles in my head. but i'm glad it fit for you too~

you kind of guessed why i didn't continue after where i ended. i'm not exactly confident that this set up would lead to a sustainable relationship (minho has already snapped, jinki is like a channel). but to some people it might be exactly what clicks so i left it open.

anyway i am happy you liked it!

[rallyingpoint]

Oh so that's why. tbh I don't think Jinki's the best person for Minho right now... since Jinki probably has issues of his own. The guy is doing phone sex for a living. >__< But at least he has better idea of what he wants to do and how to get there unlike Minho. Hopefully Minho learns something from their relationship.

Wait, why I am thinking they're doomed from the start? They can make it work somehow, if both of them grow. I think.

[pateshie]

i did but i feel like it turned out really boring lmao!