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[pateshie]

title a lot like love
count ~5000
a/n i wrote this because i wasn't around in ficdom before 2011 and i never got to try my hand at the teach me how to kiss, are we friends or are we more, awkward first love trope. continuing from that, this is canon and set pre 2010.

Comments

[maepp]

this is so lovely ;;;;; i love the way this is written bc it feels so very 2010 and i miss this kind of fic. the characters are so sincere and sweet and placed into the reality so delicately ;; you really met your goal of an awkward first love trope, very much so! i can't even think of what to say about this bc i just love it so much.

your writing is perf and jongyu and!! thank you for writing and sharing this!!

[life_not_knife]

"Jinki fights down a blush. “What?”

“I’m pretty sure I’m still a virgin.”

He can’t help the small groan that escapes him. “Jonghyun.”

- THIS part right here... I think any good piece of writing has that moment that is just so iconic and perfect for the piece that it sums everything up. And this, just - well, i'm in awe.

The build up of tension and feelings was just perfect. I feel like i've been through a rollercoaster of fairytales and difficult emotions. I don't know why the image of romeo and juliet stayed with me through the whole thing but it did, and it kind of worked for me haha.

Anyway, i'll stop rambling but please know that I LOVE this. So thank you for writing and sharing.

Xx L xX

[bffimagine]

God could this BE any more perfect?!

Your characterization is beautiful and I honestly can't get any words down right now that can describe how wonderfully you portrayed the emotions and just...gah! Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing! <3

[oconje]

Ugh so beautiful