Everything about this fic is incredible. All the characters were well written, I love them all especially sodam. And jjong. and the ending gosh it's so perfect. You write it as a teenage dilemma, but you know how love is all about dramatic even for an adult lol. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us <3
Oh wow, this was incredible! You captured what it is to be a teenager perfectly. I loved watching Jonghyun fall in love with Minho over that summer, and he matured a little as well. I don't know how to describe the good feelings this fic left me with. This is some very special work you've created, and I loved reading every word of it. Thanks for posting it!
oh wow, look! you did continue the story! need to troll harder next time :) let me take a moment to copy/paste a few lines out this piece of glory of yours which made me laugh out loud and/or really impressed me
He gathered the evidence in his head. Minho had lived in Seoul, which meant he was some sort of rich. - small town skater jonghyun is gold!
"Don’t you dare say it’s you, I will drive this car into a ditch. I did not come here for some cheesy movie dialogue.” - i love SoDam to stand in as jong's more pragmatic side.
His blood splattered on the asphalt, marking his territory.
“This is the end,” he explained, watching the sky turn pink. “We’ve kissed, we’re together now. All the people who were trying to get us together, who were rooting for us can zip up their coats and go home happy. They can close the book, toss the remote aside. It’s just you and me now.”
This. This is just so... deep, you know? yeah, you probably do, since you, like, wrote it, haha! wow, wow, wow.
Thanks again for writing Shinee fanfiction, and such
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let me take a moment to copy/paste a few lines out this piece of glory of yours which made me laugh out loud and/or really impressed me
He gathered the evidence in his head. Minho had lived in Seoul, which meant he was some sort of rich. - small town skater jonghyun is gold!
"Don’t you dare say it’s you, I will drive this car into a ditch. I did not come here for some cheesy movie dialogue.” - i love SoDam to stand in as jong's more pragmatic side.
His blood splattered on the asphalt, marking his territory.
“This is the end,” he explained, watching the sky turn pink. “We’ve kissed, we’re together now. All the people who were trying to get us together, who were rooting for us can zip up their coats and go home happy. They can close the book, toss the remote aside. It’s just you and me now.”
This. This is just so... deep, you know? yeah, you probably do, since you, like, wrote it, haha! wow, wow, wow.
Thanks again for writing Shinee fanfiction, and such ( ... )
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