My Body Is A Cage (My Mind Holds The Key)

[pathosical]

Title:  My Body Is A Cage (My Mind Holds The Key)
Fandom: Stargate Atlanits
Prompt: written for stargateland's Little!Big Bang Challenge, my prompt was Elizabeth/Divided
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,773
Summary: Memories could be altered, futures could be created. And Elizabeth couldn't afford to wait for a rescue that she wasn't even sure would come.
Warnings:

Comments

[leesa_perrie]

This is very well written - I love how you contrast present and past. That last line is perfect in its poignancy!

[pathosical]

Thank you so much :D

[meridian_rose]

I loved the whole theme of uniting over dividing. Loved the backstory where Elizabeth asserts her independence and finds her place in the world.

She was either drowning in darkness or burning in light. Such a lovely turn of phrase!

One minor thing: should control council be control console? (This is the sort of stuff I miss in my own writing all the time)

[pathosical]

Thank you so much! :D

*blushes* Umm... yeah that it should definitely be. Thanks for letting me know!

[colls]

Such a lovely character piece! I like the snippets from her past and how they meld so well with her captive state. Nice job. :)