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Sep 11, 2004 00:37
Claustraphobia
Paranoia
... to fill the void...
I wander in my own confusion
I revel in my self isolation
I fell into the abyss
I drowned.
I died.
Today.
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redchippednails
September 11 2004, 08:30:18 UTC
Maybe bring out the metaphor of drawning a bit more, instead of saying it outright. poetry is a mirror and a masque to what you are really feeling
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