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[patrota]

who are you to think you're better?
who are you to pass me by?
you are someone else's dissapointment too.
the embodiment of someone else's grief.

I reach for a lover,
I reach for a friend...
someone to assuage the emptiness
all consuming
hungry as fire

I suffocate in your indifference
you are the embodiment of
my self-hatred

why can't I be

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[redchippednails]

concepts that i liked: reaching, emptiness, stillness, a piece of heaven. again, try to not veil it all quite so thinly. layer the meanings and people will ponder more over it.

[erotophonphilia]

yeah... i didn't put much effort into these... i just wrote what came to mind. those last three posts took me a total of like a half an hour. eventually they'll turn into something. i'm glad i got some of it down though.

thanks for commenting. sometimes i feel like no one reads this stuff. lol.

<3
andrea