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Dec 02, 2004 22:35

Feelings unrequited, won’t stop hurting ( Read more... )

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yoshi911 December 2 2004, 20:34:11 UTC
damnit dude...
i envy your talent of portraying words.
as with this poem, that is something i think about everyday, and i dont know how to express it.
the words defy my mouth the priveledge of speaking it, they defy my fingers of typeing it. something just stuck in my head, with no escape rather than to have someone else say it for me.

it isnt even just this one, it is most of them. i envy that soo much. blah.

you should put together a collection of all of your poems one day and publish them. you hold an awesome power, to produce incredible peices of literature. even though some may say it is a simple poem, it isnt, it is soo much more, it is what you do, your feeling, your emotions, your personality, it touches your soul.
needless to say, i think this is some good shit.

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swing_x_kitten December 3 2004, 13:02:09 UTC
damn thats...pretty...yeah.

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maxlovespie December 4 2004, 07:21:17 UTC
nice

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