Prayers Whispered From Our Mouths [poems 24/?]

[pattyposh]

A/N: Feedback is magical.
=] also, i wrote this on 4/7/10.

Prayers Whispered From Our Mouths

Our breath rose in the cold,
like a hundred souls escaping
from these tattered would-be vessels
and today I say good-bye
because I've finally had enough
dropping burning gold into the bin
the clash rattling like the gunshots
we've come to know as lullabys
No more 'Hey

Comments

[blood_ecstasy]

This is lovely darling.

It reminded me of one of mine. XD

Mother Mary,
Are you listening?
Were you once this scared?
And does God really care about me?

*smiles*

[pattyposh]

why thank you!
haha great minds think alike.
=]]]

[scorpiod1]

Oh, that's great! Really hurty and totally makes me think of Dean <3

[pattyposh]

yay!
as was intended.
hahaha.
glad you liked.
=D