Routine

[pauljgraves]

Came home today;
Put the gun to my head
Again.

“Nobody moves or he gets it"
I mouth to the walls.

Nobody moves.
I don’t get it.

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review

[public_ear]

This is brilliance.

I -immediatly- see the scene, right down to the lighting and the dust in teh air and the colour of the walls and the time of day.

has this been published yet?

write more

-P